2013-07-19, 06:40 AM
xXSlurpieXx wrote:tobiii1004 wrote:Hi!
So I think the actual content of your app is good, but there are a few things that could be adjusted for maximum potential.
a. Put the application in a different format. Right now you listed a bunch of qualities that make you a good Trusted. It'd be a little better if you put all your points in a paragraph instead of a list.
b. Clean up your grammar on this app.
And if you just do those two, you'll be good to go!
It's amazing how smart you sound...
I love you so so sooooooo much. xD
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