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I think i am ready for trusted - daniel02112003 - 2013-07-16
I Would like to welcome people to the server as a trusted and I also believe i deserve more respect
on mctopia.I think i would benefit the server if i were a trusted.I have been on the server about a
month and think that is long enough to get trusted. If i were trusted i would only use my commands
for good,/clear would be used to clear my inventory when needed,/suicide if i wanted to kill myself, and
finally /back to regain peoples stuff if they died to traps, holes,etc.
I would overall not abuse any of my commands in any way.
sincerely,
Daniel02112003
I think i am ready for trusted - tobiii1004 - 2013-07-16
Hi!
So I think the actual content of your app is good, but there are a few things that could be adjusted for maximum potential.
a. Put the application in a different format. Right now you listed a bunch of qualities that make you a good Trusted. It'd be a little better if you put all your points in a paragraph instead of a list.
b. Clean up your grammar on this app.
And if you just do those two, you'll be good to go!
I think i am ready for trusted - GUY_US - 2013-07-16
I think you should make the font paragraph form not a list.
I think i am ready for trusted - money099 - 2013-07-16
I agree with Liam.
Try looking at my trusted app to get an idea
I think i am ready for trusted - XxL3GiTSkULLzxX7 - 2013-07-16
Making a list of things does not mean anything, it just makes the app worse, in my opinion. I suggest typing down a paragraph instead of making some list.
I think i am ready for trusted - NikolasDude - 2013-07-17
Arent you new? If so i suggest you wait some time.
Also, you cant clear others inventory if you get Trusted, and filling inventories dont lag the server.
I think i am ready for trusted - xXSlurpieXx - 2013-07-18
tobiii1004 wrote:Hi!
So I think the actual content of your app is good, but there are a few things that could be adjusted for maximum potential.
a. Put the application in a different format. Right now you listed a bunch of qualities that make you a good Trusted. It'd be a little better if you put all your points in a paragraph instead of a list.
b. Clean up your grammar on this app.
And if you just do those two, you'll be good to go!
It's amazing how smart you sound...
I think i am ready for trusted - GUY_US - 2013-07-18
You should make your app longer and you should put "I" not "i"...but other than that your good to go!
" title="Very Happy"> Your friendly friend,
Liam4903
I think i am ready for trusted - mattjtv - 2013-07-18
Read the guidelines written by me.
I think i am ready for trusted - tobiii1004 - 2013-07-19
xXSlurpieXx wrote:tobiii1004 wrote:Hi!
So I think the actual content of your app is good, but there are a few things that could be adjusted for maximum potential.
a. Put the application in a different format. Right now you listed a bunch of qualities that make you a good Trusted. It'd be a little better if you put all your points in a paragraph instead of a list.
b. Clean up your grammar on this app.
And if you just do those two, you'll be good to go!
It's amazing how smart you sound...
I love you so so sooooooo much. xD