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Hi I'm zombiebreath11 i got banned because i unbanned someone i shouldnt of unbanned im very sorry for what i did i will become more mature and use my commands the right way not for bad things that are wrong and i will not do it again or anything else bad again because i am very devoted to this server it has almost been a year since i played this server and i really miss everyone so please forgive me thank you ok im making this ban appeal rock right now hopefully I love minecraft and mctopia and I want to become a mctopian like all of my other friends and I have no idea why I unbanned that griefer spencer7124 I hated him he griefed my house before I became SD and this is my only account and I spent all of my pocket money on SD and my dad and mum are really mad at me for paying 100 dollars so I have to get it back
and im such a jerk for doing that stupid thing and by being banned I have learned a lesson that when you do something bad you have to face a bad consequence so p-lease unban me thank you for reading this.
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Oh my god, you only have one period in this entire ban appeal, and it is at the end. Also, you really need to fix your grammar.
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mattjtv wrote:Oh my god, you only have one period in this entire ban appeal, and it is at the end. Also, you really need to fix your grammar.
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mattjtv wrote:Oh my god, you only have one period in this entire ban appeal, and it is at the end. Also, you really need to fix your grammar. athiests have a god?
Saying f*** you to people who hurt you feels really good.
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Alright, here's my critique, haha.
I'm not all that familiar with you, or what you did, and to staff, it's important we know what you did. I would suggest more development on why you're banned. It would help a lot, with clarifying the reasons and such.
Now, I'm sure everyone will say this at one point or another, but PLEASE fix all of your grammatical errors. Excellent grammar makes you sound serious and polished, and it makes the appeal much easier for us to read.
Try to refrain from using phrases like "bad things", "making this ban appeal rock right now", or "stupid thing", if you substitute in a more mature phrase, it would make you sound more polished, just like fixing your grammar would.
If you need any more help, you can PM me or any other staff here on the forums, or you can get your friend on the server to PM one of us as well. I understand that you've been asking your friend to repetitively ask kittens1234, the Admin, for advice on the appeal. I would suggest you ask other members on staff as well, for a more rounded opinion.
Best of luck!
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Qu3sti0nMark wrote:mattjtv wrote:Oh my god, you only have one period in this entire ban appeal, and it is at the end. Also, you really need to fix your grammar.
athiests have a god? Nope, just a figure of speech
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Qu3sti0nMark wrote:mattjtv wrote:Oh my god, you only have one period in this entire ban appeal, and it is at the end. Also, you really need to fix your grammar.
athiests have a god? +1
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Sunday - Sun's day
Monday - Moon's day
Tuesday - Tiu's day
Wednesday - Woden's day
Thursday - Thor's day
Friday - Freya's day
Saturday - Saturn's day
Which one do you worship? You say all these words for the days of the week, but you most likely don't worship any of these things.
Let me say "Oh my god" without worshipping a deity, and I will let you say the days of the week.
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Can you move the atheism topic elsewhere xD this is a ban appeal fellas
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mattjtv wrote:Sunday - Sun's day
Monday - Moon's day
Tuesday - Tiu's day
Wednesday - Woden's day
Thursday - Thor's day
Friday - Freya's day
Saturday - Saturn's day
Which one do you worship? You say all these words for the days of the week, but you most likely don't worship any of these things.
Let me say "Oh my god" without worshipping a deity, and I will let you say the days of the week. +10 to athiests
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