i would love to became a trusted

[tiff_rat]

Hello Inspirson and all ,i'm tiff_rat
I would like to be trusted because i'm nice to all and try make things right i'm hard working to make the right choice to all things as in the commands and ranks ." title="Very Happy">

I will try my hardest to stop mctopian's that grief and do bad. By when i try stop them i tell what wrong there doing and what the after party is

I've gott'in a lot of friends along the way of becoming a mctopian ive been on the sever for a few months and heard of it by my good brother Case_meister who introduced me to minecraft and created my account.

I'm sure a lot of people would beleive that i will do the right things to all mctopians and higher or lower ranks. " title="Razz">

This is the best sever EVER
Again im ,[tiff_rat

[inspironwins]

Denied, please fix it up a bit grammar/punctuation issues. Add a bit more information like how you heard about the server.

[challenger410]

yeah, just a little backwards english, but other then that, its great you used all the right words, just gotta put them in order! hope you get trusted!

[GoldenLynx54]

heh, I love the colors.

[xXSlurpieXx]

Inspiron, he did say how he came along the server... Indirectly, by his brother... But I agree the grammar is sketchy.

[inspironwins]

Approved.

[Aidan]

Tiff-rat is a girl not a boy, she is my girlfriend " title="Smile">

[Aidan]

I mean wife!