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a better poem
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#1
2012-12-22, 02:29 PM
merry christmas to all,
and holiday cheer!
may joy find you all
and your loved ones be near
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2012-12-22, 02:32 PM
it's not necessarily better
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2012-12-22, 02:50 PM
its simple, yes i know. but it doesnt try and rip itself apart when you read it...
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2012-12-22, 03:31 PM
BEST POEM EVER
10/10 <img src=" title="Very Happy">
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2012-12-22, 03:53 PM
If you didn't have such a nasty attitude, I'd give a good response.

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2012-12-22, 04:01 PM
BrookeTheSheep wrote:If you didn't have such a nasty attitude, I'd give a good response.

Same here
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2012-12-22, 05:52 PM
its not that im being nasty..im just critical of things i really care about.
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2012-12-23, 04:03 AM
There's a very fine like between critical and rude.
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2012-12-23, 08:32 AM
ah see theres that word again. i am clueless as car as having any common sense, and i cant pick up on subtle hints like rudeness. im sorry if i seem rude, im just being straightforward
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2012-12-23, 08:36 AM
You are a scathing judge, and need to lighten up.

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