1258933's mod app edited #3 better spelling/grammar

[zombielover99]

That time I said word though

[Abab]

1258933 has helped me and others lots of times. I vouch.

[xXSlurpieXx]

125. As I've told you before, you're not ready. The fact you made so many applications proves this. You do help, but I don't think you've been here long enough, nor have you done anything to help the server in the long run.

Try to start more community projects, inform yourself on the website and forum, and help people without spamming.

[1258933]

Jamourous wrote:Hello, Fellow Staff Members, McTopia Community, and Friends.

First of all, I want to say I am deeply ashamed of myself.

I revisited this tonight for one reason, to apologise to 125. I have no words to describe how idiotic I was in that call, and the direct actions I took because of the way I felt. I let myself go, and I felt invincible, the thing I had been avoiding, and had finally hit. But, there is no excuse for this, and I'm not going to justify what I did was right by a endless line of excuses. I was wrong, and I know my fellow staff members are disappointed in my actions. I am, if not more, upset with myself for this borderline abuse of power. This behaviour for me is not only unacceptable, but it does not show the values I live for.

I am sorry to 125, for the extreme disrespect I made you endure.
I am sorry to Meta, Chall, Tobii, Zombie, Mcman, Inspiron, and my fellow staff members. I let every single one of you down.
I am sorry to anyone else, who was offended, shocked or otherwise upset with my actions.

My justification for such a disgusting act was never going to be a way to cover it up. I am now seriously considering my work, and what I need to change. I would rather not be reminded of my actions, I'm kicking myself already, and I am starting to become more aware of my attitude towards such events is not something I can joke about.

I want to stress that this was, and still is, an isolated incident. I want you all to know that this will NEVER happen again.

I promise.

I forgive you and matt! But what you did here was very staff like, it takes true confidence to do that so i forgive you. I am very disappointed in what you and matt did though please for the sake of every mctopian DO NOT DO THAT AGAIN. Staff needs to look professional and very nice. What you both did there was VERY MEAN and unbecoming of you. mctopia is getting bigger and bigger, we do not have room for people to go kicking people out for no reason. I had to finish up something but i couldn't with you and matt doing those kid of things. Jam I forgive you dont worry you to nice and sometimes, power can go to the head. But please dont let this happen again...



Is this staff worthyness

[Jamourous]

1258933 wrote:

Jamourous wrote:Hello, Fellow Staff Members, McTopia Community, and Friends.

First of all, I want to say I am deeply ashamed of myself.

I revisited this tonight for one reason, to apologise to 125. I have no words to describe how idiotic I was in that call, and the direct actions I took because of the way I felt. I let myself go, and I felt invincible, the thing I had been avoiding, and had finally hit. But, there is no excuse for this, and I'm not going to justify what I did was right by a endless line of excuses. I was wrong, and I know my fellow staff members are disappointed in my actions. I am, if not more, upset with myself for this borderline abuse of power. This behaviour for me is not only unacceptable, but it does not show the values I live for.

I am sorry to 125, for the extreme disrespect I made you endure.
I am sorry to Meta, Chall, Tobii, Zombie, Mcman, Inspiron, and my fellow staff members. I let every single one of you down.
I am sorry to anyone else, who was offended, shocked or otherwise upset with my actions.

My justification for such a disgusting act was never going to be a way to cover it up. I am now seriously considering my work, and what I need to change. I would rather not be reminded of my actions, I'm kicking myself already, and I am starting to become more aware of my attitude towards such events is not something I can joke about.

I want to stress that this was, and still is, an isolated incident. I want you all to know that this will NEVER happen again.

I promise.

I forgive you and matt! But what you did here was very staff like, it takes true confidence to do that so i forgive you. I am very disappointed in what you and matt did though please for the sake of every mctopian DO NOT DO THAT AGAIN. Staff needs to look professional and very nice. What you both did there was VERY MEAN and unbecoming of you. mctopia is getting bigger and bigger, we do not have room for people to go kicking people out for no reason. I had to finish up something but i couldn't with you and matt doing those kid of things. Jam I forgive you dont worry you to nice and sometimes, power can go to the head. But please dont let this happen again...



Is this staff worthyness

I am afraid not...

At fear of damaging myself further, I say this with the uppermost respect to your application.

What you did, was forgive me. That is somewhat staff worthy, but unfortunately it's not enough in most people's eyes.

You also demonstrated a level of writing that is not up to the standards we expect, so I believe there needs to be an improvement there. With that being said, the main text mostly addresses the letter, so I do applaud you for that.

It's a start 125, but not exceptional. It's also not too bad, but as the topic header says, you are competing against many people, and your writing here needs to be impeccable, if not without error. This is far from perfection, but within reach. Grab a bit of help, lock all the excess topic's and just take the criticism. If you can fix anything by what I, or anyone else has said here, it will begin a road to greatness.

I'm not changing my vote, but, I'm happy to change my mind. Prove yourself, and I will seriously consider a vouch.

[1258933]

I can take crap just so you know ~Says that in the nicest way possible~
Yes I agree I need lots of improvement but can never get there... I have been mean to some people, so to all those people out there that I have ever hurt I'm am very sorry. Even as a member I wasn't the main person for the nice words you would expect. So I will make much improvement.
~1258933

[Jamourous]

1258933 wrote:I can take crap just so you know ~Says that in the nicest way possible~
Yes I agree I need lots of improvement but can never get there... I have been mean to some people, so to all those people out there that I have ever hurt I'm am very sorry. Even as a member I wasn't the main person for the nice words you would expect. So I will make much improvement.
~1258933

As soon as you said that, I was about to vouch, but then I read the General Discussion.

I am really starting to doubt you listen or read any of our advice. You have been told not to spam, but you just did. You have been told to be nice to staff, but you wrote a degrading open letter to Meta. You have been told to use proper grammar, but I can count more mistakes here, than your actual application.

I am personally starting to get really tired of telling you to pick up your game. You can do better.

[xXSlurpieXx]

Jamourous wrote:

1258933 wrote:I can take crap just so you know ~Says that in the nicest way possible~
Yes I agree I need lots of improvement but can never get there... I have been mean to some people, so to all those people out there that I have ever hurt I'm am very sorry. Even as a member I wasn't the main person for the nice words you would expect. So I will make much improvement.
~1258933

As soon as you said that, I was about to vouch, but then I read the General Discussion.

I am really starting to doubt you listen or read any of our advice. You have been told not to spam, but you just did. You have been told to be nice to staff, but you wrote a degrading open letter to Meta. You have been told to use proper grammar, but I can count more mistakes here, than your actual application.

I am personally starting to get really tired of telling you to pick up your game. You can do better.

I have given him at least 5 talks about this. He never listens.

125. Listen to me. Your temper needs to be fixed. You are not to use caps. Please try not to help people before you figure yourself out. You jump into other people's games, and you break rules or start arguments that ultimately leads to you more trouble. If you haven't realized that, you need to. It's not fun to see you rage like you did with Meta every day. I'm here to help, and so are many others, you just need to LISTEN.

[xXSlurpieXx]

xXSlurpieXx wrote:

Jamourous wrote:

1258933 wrote:I can take crap just so you know ~Says that in the nicest way possible~
Yes I agree I need lots of improvement but can never get there... I have been mean to some people, so to all those people out there that I have ever hurt I'm am very sorry. Even as a member I wasn't the main person for the nice words you would expect. So I will make much improvement.
~1258933

As soon as you said that, I was about to vouch, but then I read the General Discussion.

I am really starting to doubt you listen or read any of our advice. You have been told not to spam, but you just did. You have been told to be nice to staff, but you wrote a degrading open letter to Meta. You have been told to use proper grammar, but I can count more mistakes here, than your actual application.

I am personally starting to get really tired of telling you to pick up your game. You can do better.

I have given him at least 5 talks about this. He never listens.

125. Listen to me. Your temper needs to be fixed. You are not to use caps. Please try not to help people before you figure yourself out. You jump into other people's games, and you break rules or start arguments that ultimately leads you to more trouble. If you haven't realized that, you need to. It's not fun to see you rage like you did with Meta every day. I'm here to help, and so are many others, you just need to LISTEN.

[Metazard]

After today's episode I can safely say that unless something major changes, you will never get a staff rank, you're not enforcing our rules, you're breaking them.