Williamsayshello ban appeal

[williamsayshello]

Hello all Mctopia users, my name is williamsayshello and i would like to apologize and unbanned. I was banned for griefing excessively and I would like to apologize to all i have hurt and taken materials from. When i do get unbanned, i promise to not cause trouble and try to be as nice as possible and give items to the newcomers who have just arrived. I have matured and i fell i am ready to make a new legacy in this server by helping others and respecting all staff. I will help those in need and I just want to haVe fun with the amazing staff and civilians. I have not caused any harm on my main account. I shall live peacefully and respectfully. I am sorry to all those who have been affected by my actions. Thank you for your time and Inspiron for this amazing server.

People who know I've changed:
Ionic_Thunder:Member
RedRum3000:Member

[williamsayshello]

why does no one respond

[mattjtv]

Fix your grammar, and be patient.

[Beast0262]

williamsayshello wrote:why does no one respond

Most of us don't want griefers here.

[game_jacker]

I've seen him recently on other servers, he's changed.

[kittens1234]

i'm still finding things to fix that he griefed
.-.

[mattjtv]

game_jacker wrote:I've seen him recently on other servers, he's changed.

You have four signatures, and one of them is advertising...

[challenger410]

mattjtv wrote:

game_jacker wrote:I've seen him recently on other servers, he's changed.

You have four signatures, and one of them is advertising...

Honestly, that's mainly what signatures are made for xD

[tobiii1004]

Most of the appeal is good! However there are just a FEW mistakes with spelling and grammar, and fixing them would help a bit.

I'm sorry haha, I'm a firm believer in that better grammar makes a better impression.

Best of luck, stay patient!

[zombielover99]

This is a pretty good appeal, here's what I'd suggest:

-Change the i's to I's (I think that the if you do this the app will be 2x better, I cant stand i's)

-There are a couple spelling and grammar issues, fix them.

-You don't have to go too in depth, but please explain why you want back on the server, you only mentioned what you wont do, not what you will/want to do.

If you do all of this the appeal will be pitch perfect in my books, good luck! " title="Smile">