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OK I was hoping for mod I don't really care if i'm childish i just really like to have fun with kids i'm around kids allot. So i am giving this a chance.I am really nice and always follow rules i am VIP-Gold and i am enjoying it.With mod i will make stuff in flat world like i want to yes of course.But mostly because i love this server very much. I have invited 4 people Manicman99, Ashball1337, Ashball125, and Hatman365. I've made allot of friends Kittens1234, kittycatface, MonsterGeek, Bkreitz, Lord Nickolas, Kris_Nickel, Corallightbulb, SilverWolf, Aaron i think, and many more. With the commands ill use them for good and protect the server and tell people to make sure to follow rules.I think I've been playing this server for 8 months. I've been jailed 3 or 4 times for home killing and killing in their mines. I've helped the server a little. I made a shop for it, i made a town which is /warp mysteryville, and i'm really friendly and always try to help the new people!  " title="Very Happy"> .Yes i think you might not want a mod that has been jailed 4 or 3 times, but i can give it a good chance!So i hope i get Mod! Be welcome to post comments!  " title="Very Happy"> (P.S. If I don't get I will be fine I am just really hoping for mod) (LOVE THIS SERVER)
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"...yes of course." Made no sense where it was. "Yes I think you want want a mod like that." NO SENSE WHATSOEVER. Pinkie sabotaged this post. Get a Sweetie Belle and fix the spelling, then get a Twilight and fix the grammar. Hurry.
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Err, like she said, needs the grammar and spelling fixed
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Well there are mistakes. Just get a friend or something to help you fix them.
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Aheadjeffrey wrote:OK. I was hoping for mod. I don't really care if I'm childish; I just really like to have fun with kids! (I'm around kids a lot.) So, I am giving this a chance. I am really nice and always follow rules. I am VIP-Gold and I am enjoying it. With mod, I will make stuff in flat world like I want to. (yes of course.) I'd like Mod mostly because I love this server very much. I have invited 4 people: Manicman99, Ashball1337, Ashball125, and Hatman365. I've made a lot of friends like Kittens1234, kittycatface, MonsterGeek, Bkreitz, Lord Nickolas, Kris_Nickel, Corallightbulb, SilverWolf, Aaron I think, and many more. I'll use the commands for good, to protect the server, and to tell people to make sure to follow rules. I think I've been playing this server for 8 months. I've been jailed 3 or 4 times for home killing and killing in their mines. So, I hope I get it! Be welcome to post comments! " title="Very Happy"> I found around 25 mistakes, and fixed most of them. Your grammar wasn't very good, and some sentences lacked structure entirely. A few sentences made so little sense, that I removed them altogether.
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BrookeTheSheep wrote:Aheadjeffrey wrote:OK. I was hoping for mod. I don't really care if I'm childish; I just really like to have fun with kids! (I'm around kids a lot.) So, I am giving this a chance. I am really nice and always follow rules. I am VIP-Gold and I am enjoying it. With mod, I will make stuff in flat world like I want to. (yes of course.) I'd like Mod mostly because I love this server very much. I have invited 4 people: Manicman99, Ashball1337, Ashball125, and Hatman365. I've made a lot of friends like Kittens1234, kittycatface, MonsterGeek, Bkreitz, Lord Nickolas, Kris_Nickel, Corallightbulb, SilverWolf, Aaron I think, and many more. I'll use the commands for good, to protect the server, and to tell people to make sure to follow rules. I think I've been playing this server for 8 months. I've been jailed 3 or 4 times for home killing and killing in their mines. So, I hope I get it! Be welcome to post comments! " title="Very Happy">
I found around 25 mistakes, and fixed most of them. Your grammar wasn't very good, and some sentences lacked structure entirely. A few sentances made so little sense, that I removed them altogether. Counter-Grammar Nazi! *sentences
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Chall has finished attacking. Will Wild Sheep attack?
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challenger410 wrote:BrookeTheSheep wrote:Aheadjeffrey wrote:OK. I was hoping for mod. I don't really care if I'm childish; I just really like to have fun with kids! (I'm around kids a lot.) So, I am giving this a chance. I am really nice and always follow rules. I am VIP-Gold and I am enjoying it. With mod, I will make stuff in flat world like I want to. (yes of course.) I'd like Mod mostly because I love this server very much. I have invited 4 people: Manicman99, Ashball1337, Ashball125, and Hatman365. I've made a lot of friends like Kittens1234, kittycatface, MonsterGeek, Bkreitz, Lord Nickolas, Kris_Nickel, Corallightbulb, SilverWolf, Aaron I think, and many more. I'll use the commands for good, to protect the server, and to tell people to make sure to follow rules. I think I've been playing this server for 8 months. I've been jailed 3 or 4 times for home killing and killing in their mines. So, I hope I get it! Be welcome to post comments! " title="Very Happy">
I found around 25 mistakes, and fixed most of them. Your grammar wasn't very good, and some sentences lacked structure entirely. A few sentances made so little sense, that I removed them altogether. Counter-Grammar Nazi! *sentences Spelling and grammar are two entirely different things. lol. In my defense, I while I was typing that, my mom got home, and we found out she doesn't have breast cancer. I was a bit preoccupied.
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I found around 25 mistakes, and fixed most of them. Your grammar wasn't very good, and some sentences lacked structure entirely. A few sentances made so little sense, that I removed them altogether.[/quote] Counter-Grammar Nazi! *sentences[/quote][/quote] Spelling and grammar are two entirely different things. lol. In my defense, I while I was typing that, my mom got home, and we found out she doesn't have breast cancer. I was a bit preoccupied. Awesome  " title="Smile">, glad to hear your mom is cancer free! Hmm seeing if your mom is cancer free > A mod application. Sorry to go off topic
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