2012-12-07, 02:14 PM
BTW GUYS ITS SLURPIE!
This was a quick narrative I wrote for English:
Hook
In the crazed blue moonlight on Halloween night, Faith Goodrich and Alice Markely were having fun scaring little children, Emily and Mark making out in the closet, and Emma standing awkwardly in the middle of this, making to comment. Faith was a strange girl, brown hair and had the most amazing eyes you could ever think of. On the other side... Alice was a total girly girl, hated everything Faith did but yet they managed to be best friends. And Emma, Emma was unique, she was the one who was the prettiest girl in school, yet she was shy and unrecognized. Mark and Emily had just finished high school, them obviously in a relationship. They were hired by Faith's parents to babysit her, but took on the job of the other two teens. They thought the three kids would be easily manageable... but they weren't prepared for what happens next.
-Part 1-
After all the little children went to bed after stuffing their faces with candy and pretzels, the 5 friends walked down the street to ransack the leftover bins of Kitkats and Hershey bars. The kids wandered off finding candy while Emily and Mark where distracted by each other. Suddenly, a thunderclap hit them when a gunshot rang through their ears, and the three kids had vanished. Meanwhile, the three kids were stunned at the fact that a bullet had whizzed through the pumpkin head they had just walked by. Emma and Alice ran into a wall and knocked themselves out, leaving Faith all alone. Faith, crazy as she was ran TOWARD where she had heard the gunshot. She ran across the street to where the sound had come from when a Black van pulled up to her and grabbed her. She was immediately blindfolded, and walloped in the gut. Her gut stung and she could feel the bruise forming on her stomach. The terrible smelling black bag over her head reeked of snot and vomit and other things she couldn't even imagine. She breathed in and out of her mouth quietly and tried to slip into sleep, when she was smacked in the cheek, which knocked her out cold.
-Part 2-
Faith finally awoke and the blinding sun struck her eye to make a tear. She was at least hopeful when she saw Jesse and Emily sitting in the chairs next to her. All three of them were taped by their hands and feet to each of their chair, each looking to escape the entrapment of this smooth white box. They all saw a window with a little ledge about 9 feet up. On the ledge a small flower lay, enjoying the air flow coming in from the eroded window.
"Wh-w-w-here are we?" Said Emily.
"Hehe it echoes" replied Faith completely unaware of the severity of the situation.
"Look guys I’ve seen how to get out of this in a movie once" said Jesse, trying to act triumphant. Unfortunately, after five minutes of hopeless attempts, Jesse lay in a tumbled mess of rope and broken chair pieces. Almost immediately after Emily stood up with her effervescent nails shimmering in the dark room, almost mocking Jesse at his pathetic attempt.
"Why didn't you do that before?" Jesse shot his words at Emily.
"Oh I just wanted to see you try babe, no biggie."
"Hey why don't we try to climb out that window"? Said Faith.
"No, we are moving and judging by the size of this room... we are flying." Emily's words hung in the air.
On the other side of the room there was a small doorway, the door was locked obviously, and the room had nothing but the chairs and rope, it also had the flower.
Faith grabbed some rope and a chair leg and made her way to the door. While she was working, Jesse snuck to the window and used one of his chair legs to swipe the flower off the ledge and then stuck it in his pocket. The door opened and Faith stepped through, signaling them to follow. They walked for a while and finally found another room. As the three of them walked into the room the only light visible was light that had illuminated off of dozens of monitors. Monitors were everywhere, Hanging from the ceilings, mounted on walls and even implanted into the floor. Jesse stepped further into the room, taking caution. It was silent. He quickly snapped his head around when another door opened. This door was identical to the one that he had already walked through, but it wasn't the door that was special. It was the two shadowy figures that stepped through it.
-End of Chapter 1-
Hallo uh I wrote this in English in about 20 minutes, well the WHOLE thing in 20 minutes this only took like... 8.
Tobi said "Wow I didn't think slurpie was capable of writing a love story" and in my mind that reads "CHALLENGE ACCEPTED."
Uh I’m just lazy right now and I don't want to type more... I might do it later.
Thanks for reading!
This was a quick narrative I wrote for English:
Hook
In the crazed blue moonlight on Halloween night, Faith Goodrich and Alice Markely were having fun scaring little children, Emily and Mark making out in the closet, and Emma standing awkwardly in the middle of this, making to comment. Faith was a strange girl, brown hair and had the most amazing eyes you could ever think of. On the other side... Alice was a total girly girl, hated everything Faith did but yet they managed to be best friends. And Emma, Emma was unique, she was the one who was the prettiest girl in school, yet she was shy and unrecognized. Mark and Emily had just finished high school, them obviously in a relationship. They were hired by Faith's parents to babysit her, but took on the job of the other two teens. They thought the three kids would be easily manageable... but they weren't prepared for what happens next.
-Part 1-
After all the little children went to bed after stuffing their faces with candy and pretzels, the 5 friends walked down the street to ransack the leftover bins of Kitkats and Hershey bars. The kids wandered off finding candy while Emily and Mark where distracted by each other. Suddenly, a thunderclap hit them when a gunshot rang through their ears, and the three kids had vanished. Meanwhile, the three kids were stunned at the fact that a bullet had whizzed through the pumpkin head they had just walked by. Emma and Alice ran into a wall and knocked themselves out, leaving Faith all alone. Faith, crazy as she was ran TOWARD where she had heard the gunshot. She ran across the street to where the sound had come from when a Black van pulled up to her and grabbed her. She was immediately blindfolded, and walloped in the gut. Her gut stung and she could feel the bruise forming on her stomach. The terrible smelling black bag over her head reeked of snot and vomit and other things she couldn't even imagine. She breathed in and out of her mouth quietly and tried to slip into sleep, when she was smacked in the cheek, which knocked her out cold.
-Part 2-
Faith finally awoke and the blinding sun struck her eye to make a tear. She was at least hopeful when she saw Jesse and Emily sitting in the chairs next to her. All three of them were taped by their hands and feet to each of their chair, each looking to escape the entrapment of this smooth white box. They all saw a window with a little ledge about 9 feet up. On the ledge a small flower lay, enjoying the air flow coming in from the eroded window.
"Wh-w-w-here are we?" Said Emily.
"Hehe it echoes" replied Faith completely unaware of the severity of the situation.
"Look guys I’ve seen how to get out of this in a movie once" said Jesse, trying to act triumphant. Unfortunately, after five minutes of hopeless attempts, Jesse lay in a tumbled mess of rope and broken chair pieces. Almost immediately after Emily stood up with her effervescent nails shimmering in the dark room, almost mocking Jesse at his pathetic attempt.
"Why didn't you do that before?" Jesse shot his words at Emily.
"Oh I just wanted to see you try babe, no biggie."
"Hey why don't we try to climb out that window"? Said Faith.
"No, we are moving and judging by the size of this room... we are flying." Emily's words hung in the air.
On the other side of the room there was a small doorway, the door was locked obviously, and the room had nothing but the chairs and rope, it also had the flower.
Faith grabbed some rope and a chair leg and made her way to the door. While she was working, Jesse snuck to the window and used one of his chair legs to swipe the flower off the ledge and then stuck it in his pocket. The door opened and Faith stepped through, signaling them to follow. They walked for a while and finally found another room. As the three of them walked into the room the only light visible was light that had illuminated off of dozens of monitors. Monitors were everywhere, Hanging from the ceilings, mounted on walls and even implanted into the floor. Jesse stepped further into the room, taking caution. It was silent. He quickly snapped his head around when another door opened. This door was identical to the one that he had already walked through, but it wasn't the door that was special. It was the two shadowy figures that stepped through it.
-End of Chapter 1-
Hallo uh I wrote this in English in about 20 minutes, well the WHOLE thing in 20 minutes this only took like... 8.
Tobi said "Wow I didn't think slurpie was capable of writing a love story" and in my mind that reads "CHALLENGE ACCEPTED."
Uh I’m just lazy right now and I don't want to type more... I might do it later.
Thanks for reading!
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