REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[GemuFoxxx]

IT IS NOT OVER! i will talk with haley, and have her introduce her character. its not over, its just on pause xD everybody, write stuff about avi's little kingdom until then!

[SilverWolf101]

Ill write

[SilverWolf101]

I woke up with Colli shaking me.
"you over slept. You dont want to miss breakfast" Colli said.
"Okay ill come down in a minute." I told her.
I picked up Sparky and tried to remember my plans for the kingdom. When the idea popped back into my head i went down stairs, nearly tripping on one of the stairs.
I gobbled up my breakfast and picked up my sword. "Im goin out." I say.
"Im gonna come too!" Colli says while pushing in her chair.
"Im going on a walk" We were walking out the door.
"Ill walk with you!" she says.
"Please can i go alone?" I ask.
"Why cant I come?"
I sigh. "Do you PROMISE to keep a secret?"
"yes" She says.
"Cross your heart?" I ask.
"I cross my heart." She makes an imaginary cross on her heart.
"Okay follow me. Don't tell ANYONE about this place."
"I knoow. I promised." She tells me.
"You have to follow my exact route, okay?"
"okay" She seemed very curious.
I just remembered i forgot Sparky. "stay here. DO NOT move or you will get lost, or i will get lost trying to find you."
"Okay Avi"
I run as quickly to the house as i can. I Trip over a root, but i get to my feet and brush off the dirt on me.
I open the door and Sparky runs out. We head back to the place I left Colli. She was still there, relieved to see me.
I beckon her to follow and i climb up a tree. She follows along with Prince Tutsoya. I climb down the vine and she follows. When we make it to the clearing she looks in awe.
"This is MY kingdom. The kingdom of Quartara!" I say with pride. I feel relieved, to have at least One person to know my secret. I show her each part of the kingdom i created, i show artifacts of the kingdom and i tell her how i made it. I also told her to never go here alone, because IM the ruler.
We play Kingdom until the sky grows purple and the clouds get tinted with pink. We head home and i remind her one last time to keep the secret.
Our special secret...

[SilverWolf101]

Bump.

[SilverWolf101]

OMG HOW DID THIS TOPIC GET SO FAR BACK! It's getting dusty with no one posting on it. *brushes off dust* :3

[challenger410]

Sorry silver... But it's gone " title="Sad"> it died.

[SilverWolf101]

challenger410 wrote:Sorry silver... But it's gone " title="Sad"> it died.

No it didn't. Stop saying that or you will die! >:O I HAVE A HOE AND IM NOT AFRAID TO USE IT

[challenger410]

SilverWolf101 wrote:

challenger410 wrote:Sorry silver... But it's gone " title="Sad"> it died.

No it didn't. Stop saying that or you will die! >:O I HAVE A HOE AND IM NOT AFRAID TO USE IT

I'm Santa, I got 3 hoes :3 merry Christmas! Ho Ho ho!

[BrookeTheSheep]

It's not dead >.<

The climax happened. The story wrapped itself up.

We need a new problem, and that will be Haley's character. We will have a second "book"

[challenger410]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:It's not dead >.<

The climax happened. The story wrapped itself up.

We need a new problem, and that will be Haley's character. We will have a second "book"

Well tell haley to hurry the heck up. And btw I'm done in the story xD I've been neglected too much silver keeps saying "the rest of her family" and "all of my family" when I'm not there lol