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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY
SilverWolf101 wrote:"I won't tell anyone." I promised her.
"Where's Fay? where's Mason? Where is Colli? where is everybody!?" I asked, I held in my tears. I was losing everyone it seems.
She let out a sigh. "I don't know..." The tears I held in gushed out and I jumped into her arms. She tried to comfort me. I lost a sister, two sisters actually. No. Three. Emma. And Mason. I'm sure some of them are alive. I went inside and grabbed my teddy and got Sparky. Ahri was on the couch so I climbed on from the behind and snuggled with her. I fall asleep with 3 tails wrapped around me. I awaken at 5:32 and everything seems spooky. LIke a dream. a get up and turn around to see me asleep. I'm in the Spirit Land!

Remember this? Read the last sentences
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SilverWolf101 wrote:
SilverWolf101 wrote:"I won't tell anyone." I promised her.
"Where's Fay? where's Mason? Where is Colli? where is everybody!?" I asked, I held in my tears. I was losing everyone it seems.
She let out a sigh. "I don't know..." The tears I held in gushed out and I jumped into her arms. She tried to comfort me. I lost a sister, two sisters actually. No. Three. Emma. And Mason. I'm sure some of them are alive. I went inside and grabbed my teddy and got Sparky. Ahri was on the couch so I climbed on from the behind and snuggled with her. I fall asleep with 3 tails wrapped around me. I awaken at 5:32 and everything seems spooky. LIke a dream. a get up and turn around to see me asleep. I'm in the Spirit Land!

Remember this? Read the last sentences

You never wrote for that, and my chappie takes place a month later.

GOODBYE

EDIT THAT. lol did you not notice I was gone Brooke? Plus it's TWO Ls! srsly. COLLI!
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
GoldenLynx54 wrote:EDIT THAT. lol did you not notice I was gone Brooke? Plus it's TWO Ls! srsly. COLLI!

It's ok golden everyone makes mistakes, I think boo's chapter is a month later, after you've been found.
It's not that big a deal is it?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0xDf-_8KvGM - I'm Ready to Go. P!ATD.
Remember - It's okay to not like things, as long as you're not a jerk about it!

~What What.
Hush Hush.~
??? Well, I don't like skipping back and forth between different times. And probably not. IT IS A BIG DEAL, MY NAME IS COLLI! Not Coli.
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
Can I get a new character? the Character is like a girl :3 .


auto correct.... Character is a word... It corrected character to harasser
The Skydoesminecraft is the limit!
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Sometimes wise, sometimes chases squirrels
Wolfy AWAAAY!
BrookeTheSheep wrote:The next months in the Fairy Tree were nice.
I could do whatever I wanted. I mastered flying, and I can also make some mean cookies. If I multiply the ingredients, I can make them when I am human!
I was with True, and Trust. Happiness gave me my flying lessons. Around the time when it was Avi's birthday, something amazing happened.
I fell down, and cut my arm. A small cut, it didn't really hurt. But I was injured. That means....
OH MY GOD. I'M NOT IMMORTAL!
And that means....
James is alive.
I burst into tears. I cried for a while, out of pure joy, of course.
I grabbed the cookie recipe, and headed to say goodbye to True, Trust, and Happiness.
'I'll miss you guys! I'll visit, I promise!" I said to them.
After a few tears, and MANY hugs, I was on my way.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I turned human. It felt odd not having my wings.
I knocked on the door.
"Hello?" I called.
"NO FRICKIN WAY," I heard someone say.
"Helloooo?" I said again, shaking with joy.
"F-Fay?" a small voice said.
"Avi?" I replied.
The door flew open, and little Avi jumped into my arms.
"FAAAYYY!!!!!!" she screamed.
"What!? FAY?!" I heard voices say from upstairs.
Coli, Ahri, Emma, and Alice came sprinting downstairs.
"What?! FAY!" they screamed while tackle-hugging me.
"Where were you?!" Ahri asked.
"I was with my childhood friends, at the Fairy Tree, with Mason. OH CRAP. I forgot Mason!" I said, exasperated.
"I missed you! It has been a month for so!" Emma said.
"I missed you too!!" I replied.
Alice gave me a huge hug. She gave me the biggest hug.
"Fay... I have bad news... James. We buried him today." Alice said.
"What the heck!? Dig him up! HE IS ALIVE!" I shouted.
"I don't think he is." Alice told me.
I stomped inside, and grabbed a knife. I cut a slit in my finger. It hurt, and bled.
"Look. I'm not immortal! James is fine!!" I screamed, worried he might run out of air.
"Coli, get the shovels," Ahri commanded.
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"Work, slaves! WORK!" I ordered, trying to lighten the mood by joking.
"Yes master Fay" Ahri said, sticking out her tongue.
While my family was digging, I decided to talk to Chives.
Walking into his room, I saw him sleeping. Only Chives would sleep through something like this.
I noticed James' bed was still there. I guessed Alice moved to me and Coli's room.
"Chives?" I said, to wake him up.
"F-Fay, shh... WAIT FAY?!" he said, springing out of bed.
He embraced me, and I told him everything. He said that James was dead, and I told him about him being alive.
We rushed outside to see James, and help unbury him.
~~~~~~~~~~
They were lifting the coffin out of the ground when I came out.
I saw a pounding on the top, and a bell ringing.
I rushed forward and opened the coffin.
James, pale, yet alive, was there. The insides of the coffin were shredded
James had claws, instead of hand.
As soon as he saw me, the claws faded.
We said nothing.
I leaned forward and wrapped my arms around him. He did the same to me. I sat there, sobbing, while James was still half in the coffin.I leaned back and kissed him, still crying.
Ahri and Emma carried James into his room, but I didn't let go of his hand.
They lay him down on his bed. He sat up, and I sat next to him, tears running down my face.
"Don't you EVER do that again." I told him.
"I won't, Fay," James said.
I kissed him again, then put my head on his shoulder. He had his arms tightly around me, like a protective force field.
I noticed Ahri, Emma, and Chives standing there.
Ahri was fighting back tears, while Chives had his arm around Emma.
Wow. When did THAT happen? It is so cute!
Things couldn't be better.
Then Diligence came
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Diligence is haley's character. Diligence is Fear's girlfriend. She is there to annoy me and James. Make us angry.



That conflicts..

challenger410 wrote:I wake up from the haze. I see Purity, except she seems different.
I start to say, "Purity, why are you so..."
"Small?", she replies, "I'm like this because, I am no longer Purity. Please call me Fay. you have been out cold for a couple of months"
"Errm, ok." I respond, quite confused

"Pur.. Fay, I saw our family. They were in a fight, I just KNOW it happened. im not sure if all of it is true, but im sure James, and our family in trouble.
"I know, I was there for the most part, but i had to leave. My fellow fairies have taken me to this safe haven. They said I can stay here forever, if i wish. Mason.... your brother."
"What about him?"
"He's dead!" she begins to cry, and I run to her. we sit there for hours. we both loved him, her, becuase they were meant to live together, forever. It hurt me, becuase he was my brother. The only thing left in my family. I KNEW he wasn't dead, he couldnt be dead, but he was in mortal danger. I try to comfort her the best I can, letting her cry in my soft, shiny, orange, black, and white fur. Then I tell Fay, trying not to get her hopes up.
"James isn't dead, he IS in danger, but not dead."
How do you know, YOUR NEVER WITH HIM!" she countered, and it stung, but I stay calm, preventing my animal instincts from lashing back at her.
"I know this because, he is my brother. We come from a special line of blood, which is destined to always have twins. my fathers, forefathers, and there forefathers, and so on." I told her, " the twins lives share the same thread. If one of us dies, so does the other. What im guessing is he got hit by something, and it nearly killed him. putting him in a coma. That's why I have been out too. If he was dead, i would share hi same fate."
she sighed with relief. "thank god"
"He's not out of the woods yet, he is still in danger. He still needs to be found."
we went off that very moment, searching.
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