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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY
As I watched the fireball-Ahri- speed away after Purity, I knew I needed to do something. And I think Sparky could help. "Avi!" I yell, diverting her attention from the running figures on the distant snowy hill. She hopped over to me, Sparky trrrrrring all the time. Almost like he was talking, I thought, smiling. "What's up Colli?" Wrenching myself from my thoughts, I say, "I need you to help me-and I'll need Sparky." I explain to her how I need her to help me perform a spell, and how it would help us get Purity back. A few seconds later I prepare the spell. Avi, even though she was a novice at magic-so am I-, I had her help. "Soooo." I had said. "Can Sparks make fire yet? Breathe it on command?" Avi didn't really know what to do when I asked that. So I carried on with the spell. "One. Two. Three." I start muttering magical incantations and so did AVi. Soon we said it louder, so people who hadn't chased after Purity joined in.
"Ignite, ignite, shoot out fire.
Aim it at our mark.
Hit it at the two black men,
Go make a spark!"
I know, I know, really weird. I thought so too, even though I slightly made it up. But it was working, and I could see Sparky letting out some fire, straight for the two men with Purity. Soon a flame thrower shot out, straight across the trail the men had left while melting snow. We all saw it race across the hills, until we heard a "OWCH!" We were walking along the trail the fire left behind, when we saw Ahri coming back with a tired-looking Purity. She smiled weakly, and was leaning against Ahri. Emma quickly helped her, and we were soon at the house, accompanied by a now sleepy dragon. Avi put him on her shoulders, and raced to her room to put him to sleep. Everyone's eyes were shaded with worry, no matter how happy they let on. Purity wouldn't answer any questions about what had happened, no matter how stupid or trivial. I was leaning on the mossy table, playing with some moss. After the men had appeared, I had felt very odd. I couldn't feel my ears, my tail, arms, nothing. I didn't feel as if I was there. Felt like a ghost. I knew I wasn't though, but something strange was going on. If Purity couldn't tell what happened publicly, maybe she could tell it secretly. To me, at least. I needed to know what happened. Purity would know what was happening to me, I know it. When we had all settled down to sleep, I whispered, "Purity?"
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
NO NO NO!!!! IVE WRITTEN SO MUCH, AND NOW YOUR PART CONFLICTED WITH MINE D: Ive died inside D:

I kept walking, my feet frost bitten by the snow. I wasn't angry any more, I just didn't understand why ahri would do such a thing. I've talked to James, while he was a hawk, he seemed to believe I should have went back to the family, but I don't think I really fit in there. Even my brother could be a little naive at times. The last person I've had contact with was Alice. She always seemed to calm me down. When I held her in my arms, everything slowly melted away, but something told me that there was something wrong wit her. I MUST find her.
I'm so hungry. I have eaten a decent meal for 8 days. Just frost bitten carrots, and some wild green onions, that somehow survived the formidable weather. That's wasn't remotely close to enough to succumb to my tiger like appetite. As much as it kills me inside to admit it, I must return to the family. It was the only way to survive. A strong sigh, and heavy breath later, I turned around. That's when I saw it. 5 dragons. My tiger instincts have taken over, and I stalk them. There leader was a beautiful color, almost entrancing.
What are they doing here?
I thought I've been gone for only 8 days...
Has the dragon migration already come?

After a while, I noticed it. There leader was a girl. A girls with a beautiful, soft voice, and a raspy, metallic after tone. Like that one time with her. Alice.

It couldn't possibly be. This is how we were supposed to be entangled with destiny? That's when I saw the two constellations are her strong, metallic scales.
It is. It is her.
Through all of this, I was frozen with shock. He noticed me. The big one noticed me. He roared with all his might, and made me double over.
"STOP" she yelled.
Alice, or as now know, Talon saved my life. But why?
She was destined to kill me and my brother James or we would kill her. There was nothing stopping her from ending half of the prophesy right now. Nothing. But she stopped them. She changed back to human form. I didn't know what to do.
She kissed me.
"I'm sorry Mason" was her reply.
They flew off. They left me too die.
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I hate my life
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I hate my life
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I hate my life
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OMG SORRY ALICE! I didn't see taht chapter/part! I'll pretend it happened.
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
OMG NOT SORRY CHALL! I never saw dat
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
challenger410 wrote:I'm gonna write now

And then

tobiii1004 wrote:WE'RE HERE!

FantasyLand!

I'm so excited to be home!!!

Home.

Hmm. That word pings a bell in me...no matter.

It's odd how with time passing, the memories faded into the dust...

Oh, did I mention I'm the overseer, ruler, and Princess of FantasyLand? Hah, must have forgotten.

Cho flew up beside me.

"Feels great to be home, doesn't it! Come back to the den, we're all going to celebrate."

"Dangit, I can't. I have to wrap up some work..." I muttered.

Cho scrunched up her long, elegant snout. "Well come quick, we'll wait."

"Thanks." I beamed at her and flew to my castle in the clouds.

I talked to my castle assistants, reviewing what happened while I was gone. There were new twinkling lights set up in the town square. Down in Dreamy Street there was a new statue of me erected. All the subjects were living happily and peacefully, just the way I liked it.

My good friend and right hand assistant, Vi, called to me, "You've been missed, your highness." And gave me a light punch on my front right leg.

I jetted out of the castle, not forgetting the others back in the den. But as I was flying, I noticed a pink ribbon on my leg. Spinning to untie it, I pulled it off and unrolled it. Much to my surprise, a familiar cursive scrawl began appearing on the ribbon, like a scroll.

Don't forget about us, Alice. ~Ahri

Alice.

Alice.

It hit me like a brick, knocking the wind out of me...and again, memories came. But they vanished as soon as I thought about them. I felt my mind stretch, my thoughts contort from all the memories floating away into the vast void of never to be seen again.

And as soon as I was drained, the pink ribbon exploded into...into...

A cute white bunny.

Gasping in shock, I let the bunny fall.

Two thousand feet.

Grappling for the bunny, I saw that it disappeared. In a cloud of pink, glittery smoke. I felt the bunny leave, teleport to another place. I felt it leave FantasyLand and go somewhere safe.

Somewhere home.

I felt a girl pick up the bunny, and hope that it was Alice...but cry and let it go.

Who was that girl?

And then

GoldenLynx54 wrote:As I watched the fireball-Ahri- speed away after Purity, I knew I needed to do something. And I think Sparky could help. "Avi!" I yell, diverting her attention from the running figures on the distant snowy hill. She hopped over to me, Sparky trrrrrring all the time. Almost like he was talking, I thought, smiling. "What's up Colli?" Wrenching myself from my thoughts, I say, "I need you to help me-and I'll need Sparky." I explain to her how I need her to help me perform a spell, and how it would help us get Purity back. A few seconds later I prepare the spell. Avi, even though she was a novice at magic-so am I-, I had her help. "Soooo." I had said. "Can Sparks make fire yet? Breathe it on command?" Avi didn't really know what to do when I asked that. So I carried on with the spell. "One. Two. Three." I start muttering magical incantations and so did AVi. Soon we said it louder, so people who hadn't chased after Purity joined in.
"Ignite, ignite, shoot out fire.
Aim it at our mark.
Hit it at the two black men,
Go make a spark!"
I know, I know, really weird. I thought so too, even though I slightly made it up. But it was working, and I could see Sparky letting out some fire, straight for the two men with Purity. Soon a flame thrower shot out, straight across the trail the men had left while melting snow. We all saw it race across the hills, until we heard a "OWCH!" We were walking along the trail the fire left behind, when we saw Ahri coming back with a tired-looking Purity. She smiled weakly, and was leaning against Ahri. Emma quickly helped her, and we were soon at the house, accompanied by a now sleepy dragon. Avi put him on her shoulders, and raced to her room to put him to sleep. Everyone's eyes were shaded with worry, no matter how happy they let on. Purity wouldn't answer any questions about what had happened, no matter how stupid or trivial. I was leaning on the mossy table, playing with some moss. After the men had appeared, I had felt very odd. I couldn't feel my ears, my tail, arms, nothing. I didn't feel as if I was there. Felt like a ghost. I knew I wasn't though, but something strange was going on. If Purity couldn't tell what happened publicly, maybe she could tell it secretly. To me, at least. I needed to know what happened. Purity would know what was happening to me, I know it. When we had all settled down to sleep, I whispered, "Purity?"

Why guys, WHYYYYYYY?????
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GoldenLynx54 wrote:OMG NOT SORRY CHALL! I never saw dat

Not sorry <img src=" title="Sad"> ok
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Why are you so sad... You know what, Nevermind. I don't want to know.
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