REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[Metazard]

Someone else could write it but James needs to stop 'Alice' before its too late. I can do it when I get home but that'll be in 13 hours because I have stuff to do

[BrookeTheSheep]

Meta, write!
DID YOU READ MY CHAPTER?!

[SilverWolf101]

But if you kill it again, Avi will try to eat your head off. and if u go off to save Alice i wanna help

[BrookeTheSheep]

Oh my floopin' god. I posted a REALLY important chapter that NO ONE read, because they don't include any of it.

[GoldenLynx54]

Now. WHO. IS.WRITING?

[GoldenLynx54]

SilverWolf101 wrote:I saw Alice fly away.
"Will she come back?" I ask.
"I think so" Colli said. without anyone noticing, I threw a rock at James.
"ow"
"SSHUSH UP"
"I miss her already. But what kind of dragon," I stopped and glared at James, " Was Sparky?"

I hope Eregrine Revives Sparky...

didn't Tobiii say that it was a Platinara or whatevs in the chapter before this...

And who is Eregrine??

[Metazard]

Yeah I saw it. Maybe he picks you up then you both fly to where Alice was stalling the dragons. The dragons then mock him or being so small then he turns into a dragon and battles them. I don't know but you can control James for a bit Boo, don't kill him though

[tobiii1004]

SilverWolf101 wrote:Wait, YOU are Talon?

Yeah I already explained that. :3

[SilverWolf101]

GoldenLynx54 wrote:

SilverWolf101 wrote:I saw Alice fly away.
"Will she come back?" I ask.
"I think so" Colli said. without anyone noticing, I threw a rock at James.
"ow"
"SSHUSH UP"
"I miss her already. But what kind of dragon," I stopped and glared at James, " Was Sparky?"

I hope Eregrine Revives Sparky...

didn't Tobiii say that it was a Platinara or whatevs in the chapter before this...

And who is Eregrine??

It was? and if she is Talon... How is that even possible? The Talon I always write about is a bird, and a boy. .-.

[tobiii1004]

Y'all are reacting very calmly to my little outburst...

IM TALON. IM SUPRISED SO MANY PEOPLE ASKED ME.