REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[kittens1234]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:I say human.
Makes Chives even ANGRIER.

Ehhh, fine.
But, I wanna turn them into a vampire or somthin, I don't wanna b stuck with a humin.

[BrookeTheSheep]

Yes, yes, yes.
Make him a vamp, Chives will HAVE to try to remove me from the house

[SilverWolf101]

Someone write. Kitty write. WRIIITE

[kittens1234]

I can't write till I talk to tobiski.
Gawd.

[challenger410]

I was entranced. Something was different about this Ahri girl. I was attracted to her but i wasnt sure why. She keeps flirting with me, and i cant help but return the favor. i litterally CAN'T. something is stopping me. I dont know why I'm attracted, yet i cant help it. Something is going on here, but i cant explain it...

Thats when i realized, i had to be with her alone. I called her to my room, and she gladly obliged, she started to come onto me, but before she could come any closer, i touched her shoulder. I did something i promised my self i would never do. i intruded. i intruded her thoughts. Ive never done it purposely, EVER!

I soon after storm out of the room, she has been charming me! This whole time, it was a lie! i ran outside, the white, fluffy snow, slowing me down, but not stopping me. i didnt know what to do. i felt betrayed. i kept running, when a hawk soared above me. it landed i somehow knew it was him. the guy ive always trusted. we are brothers after all.

[GoldenLynx54]

.o. so much revealed in these pages!

[tobiii1004]

Do I get a love? :3

Actually I take it back. I'll invent myself a love later on.

I've got a plan

[tobiii1004]

kittens1234 wrote:I can't write till I talk to tobiski.
Gawd.

heehee. XD

[tobiii1004]

I pitter pattered in the forest in bunny form. I didn't want to deal with all that was happening.

If I acted so strongly about the egg...

How was I going to act during the dragon migration?

I didn't want to deal with it. I never wanted to. Dread filled every corner of me, and I found I needed to rest. I found my little rock shelter I built, and took it easy for a little while.

My sensitive bunny ears picked up noise. A human. Upset. Angry. Wow, this guy was furious. I peeked outside my little shelter, to see Mason storming into the woods. I was annoyed. He would disturb all the wildlife (including me). Whatever, I suppose he had good reason to be upset. The question was, what was he upset ABOUT?

Silently bouncing behind a tree, I waited for him to stop. He muttered to himself, eyes stormy, face red. Putting on a cute face, I pretended to be just another bunny. Twitching my nose absentmindedly, I hopped up to him. He scratched my head in the midst of his fury.

"Lucky bunny. You don't have to deal with all this crap." I almost laughed. He was talking to a bunny, even if it was just me. Time for me to reveal myself.

Ah, not yet. Why not mess with him.

Letting him pet my ears, I snuffled and sniffed. It was an invitation for him to rant.

"Sorceress. Charming me. Why!" He slammed his palm into a tree. I remembered I was supposed to be a normal bunny, so I pretended to recoil in fear. His gaze softened, and he offered a hand.

"I didn't mean to scare you. I'm sorry." He closed his eyes and let me hop onto his hand. He closed both hands around me and held me up to his face.

"You're a cute little bunny." He cooed.

"Wait." A moment of realization washed over him.

"A cute little bunny?!"

Time for me to make my appearance. I glowed a pink aura around me and I transformed. It was quite awkwardly funny, looking from a distance. It was Mason, just a regular guy, clutching a cute girl with bunny ears by the arms, like he was holding an animal. I laughed. Mason dropped me.

"Didn't see that coming, did you!" I smiled impishly.

Mason's face was annoyed, but not angry. Just a playful irritation.

"Sorry I scared you by hitting that tree."

"Mason I was acting." I laughed.

"Oh." His face reddened.

A moment of silence flitted between us.

"So what was all that about a sorceress?" I inquired.

His face became flat. "Just... Ahri. She was charming me this whole time."

I nodded sympathetically. "Give her another chance. She really likes you and-" he cut me off.

"Another chance?! She was casting spells into my life. Meddling with my brain! No!"

I waited.

"Finished?"

He nodded and glared at the falling snow, as if he was angry at it for falling too daintily.

My nose twitched out of habit. "Give her another chance. Honestly. She really likes you, that's the only reason she charmed you. To make you like her better."

He scowled.

"Fine. Don't take my advice." I flopped into bunny form.

Mason tied my ears together.

Hastily I turned human while he doubled over in laughter. My white ears were still tied. Fumbling, I tried to undo them. Mercifully, I untied them and they popped up, bubbly and straight up.

Scowling, I headed to the house. Whatever.

I met the new vampire along the way. Her name was Emma. I liked her...she had attitude. It was refreshing, to see how she didn't care what anyone thought of her. I didn't mind her being around. Sure, it was a little intimidating to have a vampire around you with razor sharp fangs, but...it was alright. I didn't fear her like anyone else. To me she was like a big sister, someone I could go to for advice from her many experienced years.

The egg was still sitting by the fire, but I noticed a few cracks.

Suddenly the whole world spun like a giant top. From the firelight, I saw the dragon's dim silhouette inside the egg. I moaned and felt my lips turn red and my ears take a light red hue. My teeth lengthened to thick white fangs and I tried to conceal them. My eyes burned red, my voice took a double edge. I dashed upstairs before anyone saw.

Unfortunately, out of the corner of my eye, I noticed someone standing, witnessing my quick transformation.

Purity.

[BrookeTheSheep]

Quick response chapter-

I have been waiting to see it. My hunch was correct. Alice could become a vampire, and it happens when she is near that egg. She looks scared and ashamed. I walk over, and do the thing that makes the most sense. I give her a hug. I'm not scared of her. Technically, I'm immortal until James... Nevermind.
"You can trust me with anything, sweetie" I said comfortingly. "Come upstairs, let me sing you a song"
I lead her to her room, and start singing my calming song. Soon she was a bunny, and fast asleep. I kept singing, and pretty soon the ENITRE HOUSE was in Alice's room, listening. They were all asleep in not too long.
"Why not?" I think.
I lay my head down, squished between Ahri and Alice.

Finally, some peace.