REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[tobiii1004]

Things went downhill pretty fast.

I was in bunny form, stumbling around in the snow. Scrounging for some carrots. Oh gosh, I hadn't had a nice fresh carrot in so long. My mouth watered and my nose twitched thinking about it.

I finally found one. It was huge and boasted a vibrant orange color that contrasted beautifully against the pure white snow. I hungrily pounced upon the inanimate object, gnawing away at it gleefully. It was so good. It tasted better than any other carrot I'd ever eaten. It was sheer bliss.

Munching on the carrot with snow falling in serene silence, I began to head back to my new home. I moved in only weeks ago but it felt like a lifetime was spent with them. I already had a vast new wardrobe, since evidently Ahri likes to shop for cute things. I was her Barbie doll. I still am.

She picked out a variety of skirts, more or less all of them being black, pink, or both. My shirts were all black or pink. It seemed like my color scheme would be black and pink. Biker chick skirts, frilly tutus with tiny studs, fishnet stockings (surprisingly NOT cute, moreso seductive, but I MADE them cute), a variety of preppy or rebellious shirts, and a dozen pairs of shoes, ranging from flip flops to flats to heels to biker boots with a waterfall of metallic studs along the side.

Ahri liked shopping a lot.

Setting the carrot down, I hopped in the tiny bunny door Purity installed just for me. It was only six inches by six inches, but plenty big enough for a cute bunny like me. I popped in, and yanked my snack through the door.

Hopping to the fireplace without thinking, I tried to warm up, but realized I needed to get into human form. The others had began to pet my ears like I was really a bunny, not a girl inside a bunny body. I shapeshifted quickly, feeling black corkscrew curls fall down my head in graceful ringlets.

I was greeted in human form with choruses of "hey Alice" or "hi bunny". Avi called me over and I sat by her, still in a carrot-coma. That carrot left me in bliss. It was only then when I looked at the fire. And what did I see?

A dragon egg, warming itself by the fire.

Uh oh.

I tried to walk away but I couldn't.

Things went downhill pretty fast.

I knew I wouldn't be able to stop what was about to happen. And frankly, I don't want to go into depth and explain to you what was going on. Some things, I need to keep to myself. My little secret.

I will say that my usually deep, almost-black brown eyes began glowing, though. A ruby tint colored my bunny ears and my fluffy tail. I hoped no one noticed how my voice took on a double sound, one being my usual tinkling bell voice, an the undertone being a harmonizing, deep, scratchy sound. I hoped no one noticed how my lips turned ruby red as opposed to the pink lipstick shade Ahri let me borrow.

But all those hopes were in vain.

I knew the others noticed how different I was.

I knew it.

And I knew there were going to be questions to follow.

[SilverWolf101]

tobiii1004 wrote:Things went downhill pretty fast.

I was in bunny form, stumbling around in the snow. Scrounging for some carrots. Oh gosh, I hadn't had a nice fresh carrot in so long. My mouth watered and my nose twitched thinking about it.

I finally found one. It was huge and boasted a vibrant orange color that contrasted beautifully against the pure white snow. I hungrily pounced upon the inanimate object, gnawing away at it gleefully. It was so good. It tasted better than any other carrot I'd ever eaten. It was sheer bliss.

Munching on the carrot with snow falling in serene silence, I began to head back to my new home. I moved in only weeks ago but it felt like a lifetime was spent with them. I already had a vast new wardrobe, since evidently Ahri likes to shop for cute things. I was her Barbie doll. I still am.

She picked out a variety of skirts, more or less all of them being black, pink, or both. My shirts were all black or pink. It seemed like my color scheme would be black and pink. Biker chick skirts, frilly tutus with tiny studs, fishnet stockings (surprisingly NOT cute, moreso seductive, but I MADE them cute), a variety of preppy or rebellious shirts, and a dozen pairs of shoes, ranging from flip flops to flats to heels to biker boots with a waterfall of metallic studs along the side.

Ahri liked shopping a lot.

Setting the carrot down, I hopped in the tiny bunny door Purity installed just for me. It was only six inches by six inches, but plenty big enough for a cute bunny like me. I popped in, and yanked my snack through the door.

Hopping to the fireplace without thinking, I tried to warm up, but realized I needed to get into human form. The others had began to pet my ears like I was really a bunny, not a girl inside a bunny body. I shapeshifted quickly, feeling black corkscrew curls fall down my head in graceful ringlets.

I was greeted in human form with choruses of "hey Alice" or "hi bunny". Avi called me over and I sat by her, still in a carrot-coma. That carrot left me in bliss. It was only then when I looked at the fire. And what did I see?

A dragon egg, warming itself by the fire.

Uh oh.

I tried to walk away but I couldn't.

Things went downhill pretty fast.

I knew I wouldn't be able to stop what was about to happen. And frankly, I don't want to go into depth and explain to you what was going on. Some things, I need to keep to myself. My little secret.

I will say that my usually deep, almost-black brown eyes began glowing, though. A ruby tint colored my bunny ears and my fluffy tail. I hoped no one noticed how my voice took on a double sound, one being my usual tinkling bell voice, an the undertone being a harmonizing, deep, scratchy sound. I hoped no one noticed how my lips turned ruby red as opposed to the pink lipstick shade Ahri let me borrow.

But all those hopes were in vain.

I knew the others noticed how different I was.

I knew it.

And I knew there were going to be questions to follow.

I like it. wait why am I still up? I shouldn't have this IPad in my hands. I should be asleep. O-O

[GemuFoxxx]

AAARRRGGHHH! CRAP! i wrote my sequel to when avi was in dreamland, and I FELL ASLEEP! >.<
omfg, tobii. you picked out my fashion sense PERFECTLY! HOW DO YOU DO THAT?? HOLEH CRAP.

[GemuFoxxx]

okay, the chapter i wrote is us healing avi and getting her back when she was posessed by pegerine, so can you guys please find a way to fit your stories in? XD i dun messed up by writing it and falling asleep.

[GemuFoxxx]

Avi seemed...strange. She was by now means her normal self. Her feathers had a strange shininess to them, and she seemed distant. as if she was somewhere else...
"Avi?" Mason said sheepishly "Are you okay?"
"Okay....what does the word "okay" mean? is it a Pre-South Park pronunciation of m'kay? A word used to get people OUT OF YOUR FACE? 'OH MY GOD. THERE'S A ROBBER IN MY HOUSE!' 'Okay.' I guess one would say i am in fact, "Okay", im not good, nor bad. im not really sure to be honest, but im happy!" Avi smiles. everyone looks mind-blown at the intelligent demeanor of this six year old girl! I was more concerned at why she was watching south-park...
"Masooonnn!" Alice says adorably, pouting and tugging on his arm (The nerve!). "Can you use some of your amazing magic to try and fix avi?" She gives him her bunny eyes.
"Im not sure if my magic can fix her...im sorry to disappoint you alice" She looks down, never failing to be adorable...
I pull alice to the side "This is not the time to be flirting!" I say, looking angry myself. "Im sorry, but you are adorable when you are angry, almost as adorable as me!" She stood up on tip toes to boop me on my nose, like i did to her.
Purity suddenly walked in
"I Think i have an idea. ahri." she says smugly in her beautiful voice. She held an adorable ginger kitten, with intelligent looking eyes and two tails. The kitten jumps down from pure's arms, and she suddenly transforms into a human.
"AWW COME ON! ANOTHER ONE?!?" Emma exclaims in disbelief. Pure shushed emma, and somehow still managed to make it sound beautiful. The cat woman held a staff, it had jewels that were somehow levitating in the staff, it took me a minute to stop looking at them, and look at the girl. she wore green, which complimented her ginger hair nicely.
"Pure said she needed my assistance, my name is Repaire, and i am here to help" She said in a soft, wispy voice.
She walked over to avi and got on one knee in front of her.
"Hello little bird, what is your name?" She said with a smile
"Names are an elusive thing, to come up with an original one is almost breathtakingly difficult. whether its thinking of a name for a child, or a name for the perfect character in world of warcraft, or skyrim if you prerfer, have you ever heard of perfect world international...." She continued to babble on and on.
"She isnt usually like this." Colli said.
"I would be surprised if she was, she might not still have her voice at this rate! i sould probably start doing my job. pure? would you mind helping me?" Pure smiled and nodded. Repaire raised her staff, and it started to glow a a light blue color. as she did this, avi looked at the staff, transfixed, as pure walked to her and started singing. it was the most beautiful sound i have ever heard in my life! when she stopped singing, i got afraid i would be depressed, because all other sounds might be a letdown... eventually, avi lost the gleam in her feathers, and her eyes changed back to their regular color. we sould keep this newcomer, even if our family is alittle to big as it is....

[GemuFoxxx]

*****IMPORTANT ALERT*****
Wherever you mentioned robby in the story, change it to mason XD
oh, and all chapters after this MUST find a way to include emma, purity, and repaire XD

[GemuFoxxx]

NO MOAR!! XDDD TOO MANY PEOPLE HAVE BEEN ADDED TO QUICKLY!
let me check off the characters in the family so far
Ahri
Colli
Purity
Alice
Avi
Repaire
Mason
Emma
James
did i miss anybody?
Oh, btw. add colli in more now xD she is starting to get forgotten, and you have to add emma in more too XD

[Metazard]

I hadn't been back at the house for two days, although I doubt they noticed anyways. I'm still deciding whether to even go back, my mother did say it was a safe place... I've been practising my powers, getting better and better. I flew back to the house yesterday hearing laughing voices and happy tones, guess their fine with out me...

As I was saying, I have practiced my powers a lot recently and I found out a very cool feature. Before I thought the only parts of animals I kept when I was in human form was animals senses and such, but I can also obtain small parts of them too. One day I changed my finger nails into bear claws, then I grew a foxs' tail! It was great fun.

I decided to back to the house, it was fun watching them play UNO. I picked up the carrots I grabbed for Alice, transformed into a hawk and headed home. I caught Alice on the way back to the house, crying.
"What, why is she crying?" I thought to myself. "Lets go find out"
I flew a couple meters away from her, dropped the carrots and picked them up again shortly after turning into a bunny. I hopped over to the slumped over figure of Alice with the three carrots, filling all of my mouth and sticking out the sides. I brushed my ear along her hand and she stuck her head up with extreme speed.
"Oh, it's just you," said Alice wiping her wet eyes, on the brink of tears, "Dd you get those carrots for me? Oh wow thanks bunny!"

I was happy to know I helped her, even if she'd never know it was me. I still wondered why she was crying, though I soon found out.
"That stupid dragon egg, oh they all probably think I'm a total freak now.."

"What dragon egg?" I thought to myself
Alice's eyes widened, shock all over her face
"James?" She whispered
Uh oh, I'm in the bad now, I talked out loud when I was thinking to myself, dammit!
"Change human, now!"
I reluctantly changed back to human and stood up.
"I can't believe that you did that!" yelled Alice " How dare you pretend to be a bunny and do that!"
"Do what!" I yelled back, infruiated that I was put in the spotlight for helping her, "Help you?!"
"Yeah I bet these carrots were poisoned!" Retorted Alice.
"I picked ten two days ago and went to give them to ÿõù when you were rummaging for food, then you slapped me before I could even mention them! I've camped out here for the last day and still saved them, although I bet you never noticed I was gone!"

This infuriated Alice as she did notice, but why bother sending a search party for him..

She ran off, as the sting of my last sentence sunk in. I turned into a hawk and soared into the sky flying ahead of her and landing infront whilst turning into human again.
"So you can turn into all animals." said Alice
"Yes, now come back with me to the house" I said
"I'll go alone thanks." replied Alice, the ice of her last words hung in the air with tension. She turned around and walked off.

[Metazard]

I'm going to focus on Emma Colli and purity in most of my next chapters, bye bye Alice for a little xD
She needs to STOP SLAPPING ME T.T

[Metazard]

I gotta stop writing so much, SOMEONE WRITE