REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[tobiii1004]

Did anyone read my small jealousy chapter? XD it was specifically pointed at gemu, I wanted to see her reaction in chapter form X

[Metazard]

I saw it xD
Hey tobin, why are you up so early?

[tobiii1004]

It was the next morning, and it was rainy. I pouted. I hated rain. I slipped out of bed, no longer enjoying its comfort, and started my day. I showered, brushed my teeth, dressed, and went downstairs.

It was early. Too early for anyone to be up. Bunnies always wake up early. The next ones up would be Ahri, Colli, and maybe that James guy, since they were all foxes, you know?

Nose wiggling, I began munching on some broccoli. Ew, it was squishy. Why was it squishy? In the semi-darkness, I looked down at it to realize it was a brussel sprout. NO.

Spitting it out, I rummaged for more food, rifling through the bottom drawer of the fridge while still standing up, leaving me in an uncomfortable position with my legs straight and my face pressed against the glass of the other drawer. Naturally when I heard someone's voice, I jumped. But unfortunately, my odd position caused me to slam my head on the shelf above me when I jumped. How pathetic.

Turning around, I saw it was that James guy. I scowled and slapped him.

"You tried to eat me."

"And you hold a grudge." He responded simply. Sass to ME? Mm, not going to happen.

I slapped him again, to put him in his place. I guess he was sort of cute in human form. Not going to be let off the hook, since he wasn't my type. But still cute overall.

Glaring to hide this realization, I said, "so what are you, some kind of shapeshifter or something?"

"Yeah, sort of."

"I'm not." I smiled happily, to throw him off.

Confusion crossed his face. "What?"

"Other shape shifters have infinite forms. I only have four."

"And what are they, if you don't mind me asking?"

"I do mind you asking." I said, as-a-matter-of-factly. This was probably funny to watch. He was trying to be all polite but I was shooting him down every time. I wondered if he had the ability to turn into any animal. Ahri and Colli would develop a crush on him because he could turn into a fox. Avi was too young, but she'd find him "nice" because he could turn into a bird. Me...well, I knew he'd never become more than my friend. I doubted he could turn into a cute bunny. Probably one of those jackrabbits, all skinny and long-legged. Ew!

And in case you were wondering, my type of bunny shapeshifting guy is white cottontail. Cute like me.

And he left. Because I was too mean. I cheered a silent cheer of victory.

The others began to wake up. Ahri first. I beamed at her.

"Hi Ahri!"

She smiled back. "Hi, Alice!" She bopped my nose, just to see me scowl cutely. I obliged from pure reflex. The scowl disappeared, and I pouted.

"It's raining." I cried. I stuck out my lower lip further.

Ahri stroked my bunny ears. "Shh...it'll all get better." What I didn't notice was Robby following her. And with a quick snap of his fingers, the rain stopped and birds sang. I clapped in delight.

"Do it again! Do it again!" He made rain appear, then disappear. I smiled happily.

"Thank you!" I said, before leaping into a big hug. There was nothing romantic between us, but I liked hugging him and acting all cute with him just to get Ahri on my case a little. It was fun to annoy her, like I was the littlest sister. Even though Avi was.

Colli and Chris came down next. They were pretty quiet, I didn't know what was up with that.

Next came Avi who was chipper and sunny. A little more than usual. I didn't know what that situation was either, but I didn't give it too much thought. She probably slept well, or ate something good before bed. She'll tell us if she wants.

And she did tell us. But it wasn't anything I had guessed.

Not even close.

[tobiii1004]

Metazard wrote:I saw it xD
Hey tobin, why are you up so early?

What time is it in Australia? :3 I was hoping you wouldn't notice. XD

[Metazard]

tobiii1004 wrote:

Metazard wrote:I saw it xD
Hey tobin, why are you up so early?

What time is it in Australia? :3 I was hoping you wouldn't notice. XD

It was like seven at night " title="Razz">

[Metazard]

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My face was throbbing. Why is she do damn good at slapping? Ah well, I have to put up with it, I would have died a pathetic death if they didn't bring me back. I can sense their anger towards me, they say certain animals have special abilities and I seem to get a little but of each. I wish one animal had telekanisis, that would come in handy.

That Alice girl... I wish she'd get over me trying to eat her, I've had things try to eat me tonnes of times, I was nearly digested one time... I've tried to make peace with her but everything I confront her wen others aren't around she slaps me.

I don't sleep as I can turn into nocturnal animals too, I have no need. I can sleep though. They were nice enough to give me a bed, every night I get into and pretend to be asleep, then, when everyone's asleep, I get out of the house and explore. They don't know I can turn into any animal yet so I'll keep with the fox bear story. That's what I've been telling everyone but Alice knows whats up... I wish she'd get over it, I swear my face will be permanently red soon.. Last night I changed into a hawk and soared the skies until I found some carrots, I took three and left the rest. As soon as I heard Alice wake up I got out of bed and went down to see her rummaging for food.
"Perfect!" I thought, "Maybe she'll accept these carrots as a peace offering if she's hungry."
I heard murmuring upstairs and turned around, seeing no one. I turned back around but I stumbled, making a noise. Alice got a fright and hit her head, I kinda felt sorry for her until she turned around with a scowl on her face, right then I knew I'd need to feel sorry for myself very soon. She slapped me a lot even when I was just trying to be polite. I got so enraged I could have turned into a bear and finished her right then and there but I didn't do that, or show her my anger on my face, I didn't want to give her that pleasure.

I left the house and went into the forest. It's where I kept all my loot, well, just one picture. It was a picture of mum and me, we're running down a path with our backs to te view point. The picture is in a Lockett, I suppose it belonged to her. I grabbed hold of the locket and squeezed it hard, feeling the energy inside. It calmed me down.

"I'll show her..." I thought to myself and turned into a male copy of her rabbit. I bounced around a bit but stop when I tripped and landed on my face. My picture isn't my only loot though, my mother had a diary, it's pages totally blank though...

I picked up the diary and opened it up to the first page, expecting the normal blankness but instead I was suprised to see black, curly writing. It said:

James, to be reading the first pages of this diary, you must have found a place to call home, some where safe. James I'm sure you are very aware that you are an animagus, shapeshifter and that you can change shape to what ever you like. While you may get tired from using big forms, this will go away in due time. Getting better at your powers will unlock more of these pages. James I did not abandon you, I love you and always have and if it was up to me id be with you. Oh and James, she's not just a bunny or a human.

A droplet of water slid down my face, I knew it was not rain because that had stopped log ago, it was because for the first time in my life, I knew I had a mother, and she loved me.

I thought about one thing in the journal.. "She is not just a bunny or a human." Was that Alice? If so, how did mum know I'd meet her? And how is she not just a bunny human? It's not up to me I guess. I turned into a hawk and flew back to the house.

[BrookeTheSheep]

Is anyone going to include my character?

[Metazard]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:Is anyone going to include my character?

Sorry, I was doing a lot of backstory stuff

[GoldenLynx54]

Sorry Brooke. Purity is just so...confusing as a character. I don't know how to include her >.<

[GoldenLynx54]

KITTY! I SEE YOU DERE! Write it naaaaow!