REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[SilverWolf101]

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[BrookeTheSheep]

PROFILE-
~flashback~
(3rd person point of view)
(Ahri finds me, if thats ok)

Ahri was taking a walk in the woods one day when she heard... music. A song... a sweet wonderful song. Ahri froze. A girl with copper hair, and big greens eyes walked in front of her. She looked around 15, but there was a look deep in this girl's eyes that told he she was much older. She was singing. Singing something in a different language. This girl was powerful. Magical. Enchanted. Her voice was like numbing medicine. Ahri tried to speak, but couldn't. The girl stopped singing, and looked at Ahri. Ahri slowly became more aware of everything.
"Who.. Who are you?" Ahri managed to say.
"Purity," the girl said, "I am cleanness, clearness, clarity, freshness; sterility, healthiness, safety. I'm virtue, morality, goodness, righteousness, saintliness, piety, honor, honesty, integrity, decency, ethicality, impeccability; innocence, chastity. But I prefer to just be called Purity."
Ahri stood there, dumbfounded.
"I'm lost. I'm not wanted, or needed anywhere." Purity said.
"I... I can help you" Ahri said.

(Kay, so we all live in a big house, right? Thats what i think is correct, so ima go with it)

"You can live with me. I live in a big home, with other people who are... different." Ahri said, feeling confident.
~End of flashback~

So, basically, Purity is a unique girl. No one knows much about her, but she fits in with everyone, like she knew them her whole life. Purity can help rid of evil.

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Chapter I still don't know

This bunny, or half bunny, is now Colli's pet. If came a few minutes ago. I want to know more about Alice.
"Bedtime!" Ahri called out.
"But where will Alice stay?" I ask.
"We'll figure it out. just go to bed." I walked up the stairs and opened the door to my room. I could feel Ahri's concerned gaze. She thinks it might happen again. I know tomorrow will be filled with questions. I squeeze my eyes shut and drifted off to sleep.
I wake up seeing a bandage over my injured arm. I smile.

Ahri is so caring

I open the door and shut it with my foot. I walk down the stairs to see everyone at the table.

they didn't wake me up! I oversplept! well. I suppose they didn't want me to be tired. And it's not like I have school. Better prepare myself for the questions.

I sit down, prepared for the questions.
"What was going on when I first came here?" Alice wonders.
"Well. It was sorta like she fainted" Ahri answers. Everyone turned to me.
Sighing, I say "Well it started when I woke up for the second time. I was going to tell you, Ahri, that I couldn't sleep. But it was like she couldn't hear or see me. I couldn't interact with anything either. I noticed that I was somewhat transparent. I looked out the window to see another of my kind, also transparent. His name was Talon and he told me what was going on. I was in a Land called the Spirit Land. He told me that no one would see me, hear me, or feel me. He also told me that if I get hurt in that land I get hurt in real life." I gesture to my bruises. the wanted to hear more. "I got these bruises because I thought I was a ghost so I jumped down the stairs." I heard Colli giggle so I glared at her.
"Talon told me that I couldn't trust you all. That you were using me and you never cared for me. he gave me the choice of staying with you or joining his side, and stopping you. I told him I wanted to stay with you all. he attacked me for making the "wrong choice". Oh. also he told me I can't control my visits to the Dream Land. they just happen."

they all looked bewildered. I sigh.
"Can we just eat?" I ask.
"Okay" Ahri tells me.
"Something's bugging you. Besides all of that stuff that's happening. what is it?" Ahri asks.
"Well. besides the fact it hurts, this scar."
"What about the scar?"
"I think it might affect the growth of my wings" I tell her. Her gaze softens and she smiles.
"No it won't. And when you do grow wings. You will be the best flyer." she promises me.
Put in a good mood I leave the table and I decide to chat with Alice



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