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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY
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2012-11-19, 05:28 AM
Tobiiiiiiiiii are ya writing? You are good at writing. Let's talk about how good tobii is at writing. Wait this topic is for the story.
The Skydoesminecraft is the limit!
 Sometimes wise, sometimes chases squirrels Wolfy AWAAAY! 
2012-11-19, 05:31 AM
Yes. I'm writing.
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2012-11-19, 05:51 AM
Someone just write. This story is like... Awesome
The Skydoesminecraft is the limit!
Sometimes wise, sometimes chases squirrels Wolfy AWAAAY!
2012-11-19, 07:28 AM
Meta, boo, gemu, gold, Neko, tobiiii and others are not on...
My turn. Again. Chapter who cares. At first everything was blurry. But then my vision returned to normal. Colli rushes forward. "Avi! Where we're you?! we were so worried! Are you sick? What Happened?" She asks. She sure was curious. "Colli don't overwhelm her. I think she has been through enough for one day." Ahri says while gesturing towards my wounds. Realizing how much I hurt I grab my arm. It really hurt. "I think she should rest" Colli says. "No.. I want to stay up. WH-what have I missed?" I say while wincing in pain. "You missed nothing but us panicking." Colli replies. I could see the others upstairs glancing at me. ... ... It seems as if there was nothing to talk about. the only thing we could talk about is what happened. "How about you read one of your books. and if you need anything call me!" She was about to walk off until I called out "But Ahri! I read all of my books. And I looked at the pictures. The only books I haven't read are in Colli's room." "Then watch the TV." She calls back "But-" I clamp my my teeth together when I feel pain shoot up my arm once more. "But why can't I read Colli's books?" I ask Ahri. "Just watch the TV!" Colli shouted. "Why can't I read her books?" I grumble. I sit down on the couch and I pull a pillow under my head. I switch on the TV only to find baby cartoons and stuff like that.I turn it off and I stare at the ceiling. Will this wound affect the growth of my wings? Just the thought of that made me sweat. I cross my legs and grab the boom next to me. It was a big chapter boom. I bet I can read this! I start to read. I close the book. No I didn't finish it! But I learned plenty of new words. I turn to my side and take a nap. I wake up at the sound of Ahri yelling "Dinner is ready!" She calls. I stretch, yawn, and get to me feet. "Comin'!" I tell Ahri. I eat a meal of steak, carrots, and milk. I got cookies as a treat too. I could pretty much sense their worry. They think I will change because of that visit. You know what? I will
The Skydoesminecraft is the limit!
Sometimes wise, sometimes chases squirrels Wolfy AWAAAY!
2012-11-19, 07:37 AM
Brooke write
The Skydoesminecraft is the limit!
Sometimes wise, sometimes chases squirrels Wolfy AWAAAY!
2012-11-19, 08:15 AM
Ahem. TOBIII OR BROOKE GO!
The Skydoesminecraft is the limit!
Sometimes wise, sometimes chases squirrels Wolfy AWAAAY!
2012-11-19, 08:22 AM
Book* DANGIT AUTOCORRECT BOOK IS A WOOORDDD!!!!
The Skydoesminecraft is the limit!
Sometimes wise, sometimes chases squirrels Wolfy AWAAAY! 
2012-11-19, 08:26 AM
I'll write.
But i need to change my character. I have a better idea. Im not a big part of anything yet, so it think its ok GOODBYE
2012-11-19, 08:27 AM
It was cold. So cold outside. My soft pink feet patted against the snow, my fluffy white ears shivering. I was small. Very small. Why? Because now I was a bunny. That was one of my forms...bunny form. I had four of them: human, bunny, and two other form that no one but me knew about.
Upon my shivering and stumbling, I came across a large house. At least there was a few lanterns in the front. The doorstep wasn't too snowy, so I huddled up next to the door and tried to sleep. Tucking my ears, I drifted off, my whole body shaking and accumulating ice. Suddenly, the door opened. I had been leaning against the door, so I fell in, little white paws grasping the floor, searching for something, anything to steady myself on. Unfortunately, there was nothing to steady myself, so my padded pink paws clambered at nothing. My big innocent eyes looked up. A pretty girl with pointed ears and foxlike facial features looked down at me. She smiled and her gaze softened, but something about her frazzled hair and wild eyes told me that something was wrong, very wrong. She scooped me into her arms and ran upstairs. I heard her murmur, "You poor thing. You'll be my new pet bunny." I was met by chaos. There was a girl with feathers and a beak bleeding all over the floor. Another fox girl was trying to wake up the bird-girl. The first fox girl set me on the windowsill, and bundled me in a warm towel. She ran to the bird girl's aid. The bird girl was twitching and talking in her slumber. Something about spirits and stuff. The first wolf girl screamed out "Colli!" To the other wolf girl. I guess her name was Colli. Colli responded quickly with catlike sounds and words that I assumed to be some sort of fox language. I later discovered she was just mumbling pretty quickly. Stress and tension draped the room like a thick black curtain. The bird girl was regaining consciousness. Her limbs flailed and her feathers stood on end. She began twitching and jerking. Finally her eyes fluttered open and her body stopped moving. The calm after the storm. She sat up, running her eyes over her wounds. Everything about her facial features had a haunted look. She opened her mouth to speak but nothing came out. She had the look of a drowning animal, wide-eyed, pale-faced, dry-throated appearance. "T-T-Talon..." She stammered. Then she passed out again. I knew she wouldn't remember any of that...but no matter. She awoke and began watching TV... I sat with her. She fell asleep again, her two long fingers petting the star-shape on my back. My fluffy ears flattened as I began to feel a warm, pooling sensation in my stomach. Suddenly a blast of comfortable heat rose up in me. My eyes squeezed shut. I began to transform. A blinding flash of white, and I exploded into a girl form. I was a teenager, with black, curly hair. My skin glowed a pale alabaster white. Often confused for a vampire, since my eyes were a dark red shade. It was only natural. A lot of bunnies had a reddish tint to their eyes. So I wore blue contacts, making my eyes purple. I sat there on the couch, in human form, with a hint of cute bunny-esque-ness. The first fox girl came in, shocked to see me. "Who are you?!" I smiled. "I'm Alice, and I'm your new pet bunny."
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2012-11-19, 08:29 AM
tobiii1004 wrote:It was cold. So cold outside. My soft pink feet patted against the snow, my fluffy white ears shivering. I was small. Very small. Why? Because now I was a bunny. That was one of my forms...bunny form. I had four of them: human, bunny, half-and-half, and another odd form that no one but me knew about. Woo! The awesome writer strikes again!
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Sometimes wise, sometimes chases squirrels Wolfy AWAAAY! |
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