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McTopia story 2.0
#61
ALSO ONLY INCLUDE EVERYONE BUT WHO BROOKE SAID AND ME. I am coming later! if in woods, say you felt "watched" by something, which is of course Melody. WHAT IS THE ENVIROMENT?
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

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Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
#62
OMG, I GOT AN IDEA. ahri, and nami! they can BOTH be in the story! and i can control both of them. im sorry if people get agitated and also want more than one character, but this family doesn't survive without ahri. XD
DEAL WITH IT
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#63
Chapter One, Voices, Nami Point of View

Me and Alice were walking, going to see if it was true, we heard that avi and colli made a little camp in the woods when avi was only a little girl.
"You know, avi was SOOO adorable when she was a little girl Nami." Alice said to me
"I Can imagine! her kind make the most adorable and hyper little kids. they are a pain as babies i heard though. i feel as if the effort is worth it!" i replied back in my soft voice. me and Alice were like twins. we were both adorable, and she is my best friend. wherever she went, i went.
"Hey, do you hear that Nami?" Alice stopped slowly and her ears perked up i could hear it faintly, but berets sort of constricted my hearing a bit
"A little, what do you think it is? it sounds like voices...should we go check it out?" i said back with a touch of foreshadowing
"Sure, i kinda wanna see what it is..." Alice said. We walked silently, our animal instincts telling us to be careful. After walking a bit, we saw a faint pink glow coming from a little clearing in the forest. as we got closer, i saw a boy, and i saw a tiny girl. like fay, the girl was a fairy
"You have been here for TOO LONG mason!" The fairy girl said
"But, i dont know where to go! the house is empty, they arent there anymore...fay never brought me back. she said she would just be right back..." the boy named mason replied. i looked at Alice. she looked in disbelief.
"MASON??!?!?!?" Alice said loudly. Mason and the fairy looked at us. mason saw alice, and looked shockedh
"ALICE!?!?!?!!?!?" Mason said back
"Oh. My. God. FAY FORGOT TO BRING YOU BACK! oh my freaking god, i am SOOO sorry mason!" alice stammered quickly. i was confused
"Alice?" i tugged on her shirt "Who is this?" she seemed to remember i was there
"This is mason, him and ahri used to be in love back when avi was still a child. but he got mad, because ahri used alittle of her charm magic on him when he got unsure that he was doing the right thing, so he ran away and got lost in the woods. but fay found him and forgot to bring him back, because alot of big crap happened." Alice replied. this made alot of sense. when ahri was just sitting there, staring into space, i would ask what she was thinking about. she would tell me that it was just a guy she loved and made a mistake with.
"Well to be honest, i dont blame her alice...he is pretty freaking hot..." i whispered back to her
"Paws off, Nami. Ahri is going to want him back when we bring him back" Alice retorted with her tongue sticking out mischievously.
"Lets bring you back home mason, our NEW home..." alice said "Thank you for taking care of him all this time true, we are SO sorry that fay forgot to bring him back."
And so, me and alice were walking back home. with this strange, attractive boy, who kinda reminded me of a tiger.
DEAL WITH IT
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#64
Gemu, i think boo wants Mason in this one.
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#65
You gotta give em that
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0xDf-_8KvGM - I'm Ready to Go. P!ATD.
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#66
GemuFoxxx wrote:Chapter One, Voices, Nami Point of View

Me and Alice were walking, going to see if it was true, we heard that avi and colli made a little camp in the woods when avi was only a little girl.
"You know, avi was SOOO adorable when she was a little girl Nami." Alice said to me
"I Can imagine! her kind make the most adorable and hyper little kids. they are a pain as babies i heard though. i feel as if the effort is worth it!" i replied back in my soft voice. me and Alice were like twins. we were both adorable, and she is my best friend. wherever she went, i went.
"Hey, do you hear that Nami?" Alice stopped slowly and her ears perked up i could hear it faintly, but berets sort of constricted my hearing a bit
"A little, what do you think it is? it sounds like voices...should we go check it out?" i said back with a touch of foreshadowing
"Sure, i kinda wanna see what it is..." Alice said. We walked silently, our animal instincts telling us to be careful. After walking a bit, we saw a faint pink glow coming from a little clearing in the forest. as we got closer, i saw a boy, and i saw a tiny girl. like fay, the girl was a fairy
"You have been here for TOO LONG mason!" The fairy girl said
"But, i dont know where to go! the house is empty, they arent there anymore...fay never brought me back. she said she would just be right back..." the boy named mason replied. i looked at Alice. she looked in disbelief.
"MASON??!?!?!?" Alice said loudly. Mason and the fairy looked at us. mason saw alice, and looked shockedh
"ALICE!?!?!?!!?!?" Mason said back
"Oh. My. God. FAY FORGOT TO BRING YOU BACK! oh my freaking god, i am SOOO sorry mason!" alice stammered quickly. i was confused
"Alice?" i tugged on her shirt "Who is this?" she seemed to remember i was there
"This is mason, him and ahri used to be in love back when avi was still a child. but he got mad, because ahri used alittle of her charm magic on him when he got unsure that he was doing the right thing, so he ran away and got lost in the woods. but fay found him and forgot to bring him back, because alot of big crap happened." Alice replied. this made alot of sense. when ahri was just sitting there, staring into space, i would ask what she was thinking about. she would tell me that it was just a guy she loved and made a mistake with.
"Well to be honest, i dont blame her alice...he is pretty freaking hot..." i whispered back to her
"Paws off, Nami. Ahri is going to want him back when we bring him back" Alice retorted with her tongue sticking out mischievously.
"Lets bring you back home mason, our NEW home..." alice said "Thank you for taking care of him all this time true, we are SO sorry that fay forgot to bring him back."
And so, me and alice were walking back home. with this strange, attractive boy, who kinda reminded me of a tiger.

How I feel with Ahri xD
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#67
GemuFoxxx wrote:****ROLE CALL
Who is in the story!?!?!?!?! im going to write but i dont want to conflict with anything!!
i think there is
James,
Mason,
Fay
Melody
Nami (my character)
Emma

ALICE IS HERE, TOO!!!! XD

I'm KEEPING Alice. I can't stand letting her go </3 I'm also changing it from Princess Talinella to Princess Talinera. Because Talinella sounds like Salmonella when you say it out loud...
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#68
This new boy, Nami, was interesting.

I mean I liked him as a friend and all (trust me, I didn't like him THAT way. I think he told me he was gay anyway.) but...he's more femenine than masculine. That doesn't bother me. What bothers me is that...he's...

Cute.

Not cute like movie-star pop-idol cute.

But like...

Bunny cute.

No, no, no, no, no!

NOT OKAY.

I am the only cute one, and I prefer it will stay that way. I'm a bunny, for goodness sakes! I exude cuteness! From my white bunny ears to my tiny feet, I. Define. Cute.

Not to be boastful, anyway.

But he was sweet and I liked him. He seemed like he needed a boyfriend. I don't know, he just seemed like he was missing something. It was kind of sad. But we managed to be friends, even though I was determined to retain my image as the Cutest Of Them All.

Now I was leading him to Avi's secret little cave-thingy. Her "kingdom" as she called it. It was so cute. But when I got there, it was amazing. She had found a way to set leaves on the ground so they looked like a woven carpet. Broken stained glass hung from green string on the trees, making a homemade wind chime. It was very serene. And on top of a small rock, there was Sparky, Avi's little dragon.

I don't think she realized how dangerous Sparky was. When it was older, it would try to overthrow my future Light Platinara. After all, it was a Dark Platinara and I was a Light Platinara. Peregrine was the Dark Platinara to match my generation, but she cloned herself using dark magic to make Sparky. It was highly illegal and dangerous. Yet Sparky did not seem to know these boundaries because he leapt into my arms. I was a Platinara myself, I knew how to please him, so I rubbed his neck, right where there were inverse constellation marks. He purred.

Nami and I heard little voices and soft pink light. We followed the light to see tiny little fairies, bickering about something. And then there was a normal boy arguing right against them. That boy was familiar...it was...it was...

MASON!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!!!

I bounded over and hugged him. "MASON!!" I screamed. "ALICE?!" He shouted back. Nami tugged on my arm, curious.

"This is Mason, he and Ahri used to be in love back when Avi was still a child. but he got mad, because Ahri used alittle of her charm magic on him when he got unsure that he was doing the right thing, so he ran away and got lost in the woods. But Fay found him and forgot to bring him back, because a lot of big crap happened." I grinned, just happy to see my old friend again. Like I said, there was nothing romantic between us. We were the best of friends. I introduced Mason to Nami, and Nami to Mason. He smiled awkwardly. I rolled my eyes. "You're so awkward meeting new people."

Then my whole face burned fire-hot-red because Nami whispered that Mason was really hot. And I took Nami's and Mason's arms and tugged them to the house.

Well, the new house.
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#69
My turn! <img src=" title="Very Happy">

I was walking through the trees. My brown hair swayed in rhythm to my steps, the mossy forest floor tickling my bare feet. My long velvet bunny ears twitched, hearing a slight noise. It was voices; people.

White light enveloped me as I transformed into a tan bunny. Hopping quickly towards the loud voices, I peeked out a bush into a clearing. It had soft sunlight filtering through the leaves. Leaves were strewn on the ground like a primitive rug. ow they were moving away, so I followed reluctantly.

Soon we were on the edge of the forest, and I was scared to follow. Now I wouldn't have cover. But I lingered at the edge of the woods, trying to figure out where they were going. They kept moving across the plains (?) and I followed behind at the forest edge. Once the cute girl with black hair glanced back at me, but she didn't notice.

She was suspicious though. Her bunny ears, like mine I thought, seemed alert for sounds. I treaded quietly, my soft furry feet not making a sound on the slippery green leaves. In the distance was a house with warm glowing Iights coming from the windows. That place looks nice. Maybe it has a garden!

And with that, the tan bunny was off towards the house while staying out of sight.
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
#70
T.T MORE BUNNIES?!?! I have a lot of competition....
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