1258933's mod app edited #3 better spelling/grammar

[xI_JoNeZz_Ix]

Great App 1258933, hes a good friend and would recommend him!

[Metazard]

Your grammar and spelling is getting better, but there is still a lot of room for improvement.

[1258933]

I agree meta tell me more please I'm trying to do more and I think I'm slowly mature

[Jamourous]

I literally told you to clean up the sentences, and you put it through a spell checker....

Look at my previous advice comment on ways to improve, rather than asking people who are just going to tell you the exact thing. You added a paragraph, yes, but it is useless, and it is just there to fill space. Gimme a moment, and I'll edit your application so it contains only useful information.

Hi, My name is 1258933.

That is literally it. Fix it, and we'll talk

[mattjtv]

You still aren't very mature at all.

[FelledKind]

There is no need to be rude about it Matt, but yes 125 You still need to improve on your sentences.

[mattjtv]

FelledKind wrote:There is no need to be rude about it Matt

How should I have put it then?

[FelledKind]

You could have said "I don't think you are mature enough yet"

[zombielover99]

125, you're nice and all, but you've broken more rules then I can count. You are maturing but at a slow rate. You're grammar and spelling is ok at best. Don't break anymore rules, improve your spelling and grammar and hit the accelerate button on the mature level growth machine(idk xD) an you will be all suited up for Mod.

Don't put on a tie though, ties are my thing... No, seriously

[1258933]

Dude I would hate to take that away from you but *takes tie from zombie* I need it sir sorry LOL JK thanks you all are amazing people