So, I had this dream.

[skynoms]

[tobiii1004]

Qu3sti0nMark wrote:It's nice, but not my type, like its great but if you want me to like it, matts face gets torn off and tobiii cuts her wrist and slurpie paints a picture of the sun with matts blood, then tobiii dies her hair black and purple and hates the world, mah kind of story

Well this is picturesque.

[tobiii1004]

skynoms wrote:

Gracias. xD

[Qu3sti0nMark]

Well when there at the dinner party there needs to be blood guts gruesome stuff and an emo corner, I'm so mixed up in my body,

[tobiii1004]

Update:

I'll be adding my new chapters as well as a table of contents to the main post, but I'll still be posting the chapters here as well.

[tobiii1004]

Qu3sti0nMark wrote:Well when there at the dinner party there needs to be blood guts gruesome stuff and an emo corner, I'm so mixed up in my body,

Well you see, I'm not generally one to WRITE that kind of stuff but I'll...consider...

xD

[mattjtv]

Amazing writing tobi!
I kind of felt like there was some foreshadowing by saying "Blood red" like if Kittens turned evil somewhere in the story and you are kind of hinting at it.
We learned a lot about foreshadowing this year in English, so yeah

[Qu3sti0nMark]

Well at least have a waiter drop there knife on someone crothhäir

[tobiii1004]

mattjtv wrote:Amazing writing tobi!
I kind of felt like there was some foreshadowing by saying "Blood red" like if Kittens turned evil somewhere in the story and you are kind of hinting at it.
We learned a lot about foreshadowing this year in English, so yeah

NO

First of all, THANKS... xD Second of all...

IM NOT GONNA WRITE THAT SUPERNATURAL ISH AGAIN

AFTER "REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY" I SWORE I'D NEVER WRITE A LONG SUPERNATURAL POST AGAIN XD

One time on the server Kittens was painting her nails, and she said the color was like "blood red" so I just incorporated it somehow. xD

[skynoms]

You need to make a locked thread JUST for your story. And then have this for like comments