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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY
#31
Very good .-.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0xDf-_8KvGM - I'm Ready to Go. P!ATD.
Remember - It's okay to not like things, as long as you're not a jerk about it!

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#32
MOAR DETAILS! who's next??!
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
#33
GemuFoxxx wrote:Chapter one, Aura.

"'Hi there avi!" Ahri says as the walks into the room.
"Hello ahri!" avi replies "I think my wings are starting to grow!!!" Avi feels her shoulder blades
"Im glad! i will see if i can help you for your first flight when the time comes." Ahri smiles in a caring way.
"Yaaaay! thank you ahri!" Avi jumps onto ahri's back and sits on her head "Vroooommm, vrooooommm! im flying ahri im flying!"
Ahri runs, and holds avi in place with one of her many tails while avi giggles ecstatically
"Thank you ahri! that was so fun!"
Avi hugs ahri
"Your welcome little bird." she replies and hugs avi with all nine of her tails involved. avi loved it when ahri hugged her, it made her feel safe and warm
Colli walks into the room, attracted by the noise.
"Whats going on in here guys?" she inquires
"Ahri let me fly colli! it was so fun!!" Avi replies while giggling.
"That is great avi! i cant wait to see your wings." Colli beamed and ruffled avi's hair
"Thank you colli! i think im going to go play with ella now, okay?" Avi skipped off to play with ella
"Ahri?" Colli asked "Could you teach me a few things with magic please? you seem to be great at it yourself!"
Ahri looked at colli and said "What do you need help with colli?"
"Well, i love to study magic but i cant seem to cast it very well.." Colli looked sad
Ahri thought for a moment and replied "Do you feel that warmth inside of your body? its strongest in your heart, but it flows through your whole body. concentrate really hard until you think you can feel it"
Colli closed her eyes and her brows furrowed as she tried to feel the energy. suddenly her face lit up and she said "I can feel it ahri, what is that?" she asked
"That is your mana colli, the source of all magic. concentrate harder, try to channel the energy" Colli's brows creased in more concentration after a few seconds her face stopped all signs of pressure. it suddenly looked effortless, and an aura of magic flowed around her. "Whooaoh! ahri! im doing MAGIC! Holy. cow." Ahri smiled
"You seem to have gotten a grip on your mana, advanced mages always have this aura"
Colli looked suprised "Really? this doesnt seem that hard..." Ahri smiled wider "It means you have great talent colli, i guess it is my job to refine that talent! you shall be my student, i will teach you magic." Ahri looked triumphant.
"Wow!! Really ahri?!? you will do that for me? THANK. YOU!" Colli ran over and hugged ahri. "You sould go rest alittle, and practice your aura a bit more. the more you practice, the more effortless it becomes. you are advancing fast, you sould be able to keep the aura nonstop soon" Colli beamed with happiness, and said "See you later ahri!!" and skipped away happily, not unlike the way avi did. Ahri sighed contently and went out to go get some liver to eat with a smile.

END OF CHAPTER ONE

Canyou choose someone to write next? (PLZSAYME)
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#34
OKIE! write silver, wriittteee!!!
DEAL WITH IT
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#35
The blue in the sky fades to orange a pink.
"Ahri I'm going outside!" I shout
"Okay! Dont go too far" She shouts back.
I open up the door and I sit on the small hill.
"When will my wings grow?" I mutter to myself. The last ray of sunshine disappears and the sky grows purple. I get up and brush the snow off me. I open up the door and come to the table for dinner.
"What are we having for dinner?" Colli asks.
"Pork and water" Ahri says while cooking the pork. She puts the food in front of us and we begin to eat. I mess around with the food a little then eat. I yawn and throw away the leftover food. I plop down on the couch to watch TV for a few minutes before I go to bed. I fall asleep on the couch snoring softly. Ahri brings me to my room and tucks me in. She switches off the TV and heads to her room. I wake up, and notice it is still dark. I tiptoe outside of my room and walk downstairs. I look at the clock to find out its 10:00 PM. I tiptoe back into my room and try to sleep. I couldn't fall asleep so I looked at the books I had in my room.
"I have read ALL of these" I thought. I sneak into Ella and Colli's room and look at their books. I grab one that has to do with magic.I read until I get drowsy so I put the book back. I fall asleep once more. I wake up. It's STILL dark. I peek at the clock, it's 11:53 Pm. I Try and try to fall asleep but I just couldn't. In fact I wasn't tired at all. I walked into Ahri's room to tell her I couldnt sleep. I walk up to her bed and whisper "Ahri! Ahri!!"
I nudge and poke her. It's like she can't feel me at all! I try to wake up anyone in the house, no luck.
I think for a moment.
"Am I a ghost? Did I die in my sleep?" I try falling down the stairs. I DO get hurt.
"Not a ghost." I say.
Another thought pops into my head.
"DId time stop and IM the only one who is able to stop it?" I look at The clock again. Nope. It still moves. I look down sadly. Then I notice something. I'm somewhat transparent.
"What?!" I think. I walk into my room again. Then I see me, but not transparent. I try to find a boom that might help, but for some reason I can't pick it up. It's not heavy. I just... Can't pick it up. I can't interact with anything. I go to the front door. Yep. I can't interact with anything. I look through the window. I see a figure.
I begin to panic.
"A stranger is coming to our house and I cants stop it!" Then the figure comes closer. I blink in surprise. It's another of my kind AND it's somewhat transparent like me!
CHAPTER END


she's in the Spirit Land. It's her first time there.
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#36
Boom? lol
Book*
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#37
Don't foret to add all The others too <img src=" title="Razz">
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0xDf-_8KvGM - I'm Ready to Go. P!ATD.
Remember - It's okay to not like things, as long as you're not a jerk about it!

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Hush Hush.~
#38
Golden, I CHOOSE YOU! (to write)
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#39
gahh,i feel like writing again, but the next person who HASNT gone who volunteers will write. i will keep this offer up for a little while until i cant take it anymoar xD
DEAL WITH IT
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#40
GOING ONCE!
DEAL WITH IT
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