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REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY
#21
Colli is a vixen, orphaned from her tribe at an eArly age. She quickly adjusted to running from agile spiders and dodging arrows from Skeletons, which her tribe had protected her from. She wants to learn how to transform into her fox form, but no one can teach her. She loves to run and play, mostly outdoors. Fire fascinates her, and loves to sit by a forest fire to watch. Autumn is also her FAVORITE time of year, with colorful leaves and chicken dinners (lol, instead of turkey). She loves steak, and chicken too. She likes to learn magic but has trouble performing it. She cares deeply about Ella, as they shared room. Colli loves bunk beds as she is closer to the stars, or "glowing white fireflies." Colli HATES dogs because they are too rambunctious and rough with her, even though she's fine when others do it. she loves running out in the cold, starry nights and won't be back until breakfast. sometimes she has strange bouts of sickness, though she says that she is running through the Dreamy Woods. Get her ANYTHING she wants when she says that. That means she is crossing over to her dream world, where she will NEVER wake up, unless brought back. Even LIE if you have to. after that, give her warm stew and play GENTLY.

WILL ADD MOAR LATER!
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
#22
If:
She looks stronger, smarter, and older
Her feathers gleam
She is being possessed by the good one (Peregrine)

If:
She looks dreamy
she says things that don't make sense (to you)
She is staring into outer space
That means she is in the Spirit Land, the place where she can see PEregrine OR Talon. wait until I am out. But beware. If Talon attacks her in the Spirit land, the wounds will appear in real life, and if Talon kills her in the spirit land, she is forever trapped in the spirit land and Talon can control her, outside of the Spirit land.
The Skydoesminecraft is the limit!
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Sometimes wise, sometimes chases squirrels
Wolfy AWAAAY!
#23
tobiii1004 wrote:AGH. This is a pet peeve with me...

Nobody. Can. Call. Me. The. Same. Name.

So Slurpie actually already called "Tobski"...so FIND A NEW NICKNAME!! <img src=" title="Very Happy"> Kittens took to calling me Skye....sooo...yeah.... <img src=" title="Very Happy"> just DONT REPEAT NICKNAMES!!!



I claim all rights to tobiscus.
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#24
Oop! ONE MORE THIING...

She once had been possessed by Talon nd managed to kill someone. She was never the same since then. She promised herself that she would never wield or own a weapon again, but she would have to break that promise to protect her family.
The Skydoesminecraft is the limit!
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Sometimes wise, sometimes chases squirrels
Wolfy AWAAAY!
#25
kittens1234 wrote:Off topic...
TOBISKI!
ITS NOT DEH SAME
TOBISKI


Its different seeeee?

DONT YOU UNDERSTAND?

BUT STILLLLLLL

CALL MEH SKYEEEE
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#26
GemuFoxxx wrote:ok, i am bringing the story back to life. and i choose kittens, silverwolf, chally, meta, boo, and others who i forget xD (tobiski! i also choose tobiski xD)
the theme is we are supernatural creatures, and we live in a house together. everyone choose a supernatural thingy!
i choose a nine tailed fox spirit xD basicly the same as always. CHOOOOOSE AWAAYYY, the order rotation will follow as so
1: Meta
2: Boo
3: Kittens
4: Chally
5: Silver
6: Me!
7: Turbii
8: NEKOMATAAA

you also must choose a name, and the story of how you found the others. and provide art of your charachter if you want.
*If it is somones turn and they arent on but 2 others ARE on, skip them and give them a turn later xD*

lol nine-tailed fox spirit and my skin is a akatsuki
#27
mtmoon wrote:
GemuFoxxx wrote:ok, i am bringing the story back to life. and i choose kittens, silverwolf, chally, meta, boo, and others who i forget xD (tobiski! i also choose tobiski xD)
the theme is we are supernatural creatures, and we live in a house together. everyone choose a supernatural thingy!
i choose a nine tailed fox spirit xD basicly the same as always. CHOOOOOSE AWAAYYY, the order rotation will follow as so
1: Meta
2: Boo
3: Kittens
4: Chally
5: Silver
6: Me!
7: Turbii
8: NEKOMATAAA

you also must choose a name, and the story of how you found the others. and provide art of your charachter if you want.
*If it is somones turn and they arent on but 2 others ARE on, skip them and give them a turn later xD*

lol nine-tailed fox spirit and my skin is a akatsuki

ahri has nothing to do with naruto, the nine tailed fox is actually an old Korean legend.

Foxes are a common subject of Japanese folklore; in English, kitsune refers to them in this context. Stories depict them as intelligent beings and as possessing magical abilities that increase with their age and wisdom. Foremost among these is the ability to assume human form. While some folktales speak of kitsune employing this ability to trick others—as foxes in folklore often do—other stories portray them as faithful guardians, friends, lovers, and wives.
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#28
So this is a forum's story? who starts? I WANNA BE 3RD!!
"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!" -Yogscast Lewis

Herro fwends. Love you <3

Let it go! Let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!
#29
ill add you golden! and you are 3rd xD i will start the story! but i will need alittle time xD
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#30
Chapter one, Aura.

"'Hi there avi!" Ahri says as the walks into the room.
"Hello ahri!" avi replies "I think my wings are starting to grow!!!" Avi feels her shoulder blades
"Im glad! i will see if i can help you for your first flight when the time comes." Ahri smiles in a caring way.
"Yaaaay! thank you ahri!" Avi jumps onto ahri's back and sits on her head "Vroooommm, vrooooommm! im flying ahri im flying!"
Ahri runs, and holds avi in place with one of her many tails while avi giggles ecstatically
"Thank you ahri! that was so fun!"
Avi hugs ahri
"Your welcome little bird." she replies and hugs avi with all nine of her tails involved. avi loved it when ahri hugged her, it made her feel safe and warm
Colli walks into the room, attracted by the noise.
"Whats going on in here guys?" she inquires
"Ahri let me fly colli! it was so fun!!" Avi replies while giggling.
"That is great avi! i cant wait to see your wings." Colli beamed and ruffled avi's hair
"Thank you colli! i think im going to go play with ella now, okay?" Avi skipped off to play with ella
"Ahri?" Colli asked "Could you teach me a few things with magic please? you seem to be great at it yourself!"
Ahri looked at colli and said "What do you need help with colli?"
"Well, i love to study magic but i cant seem to cast it very well.." Colli looked sad
Ahri thought for a moment and replied "Do you feel that warmth inside of your body? its strongest in your heart, but it flows through your whole body. concentrate really hard until you think you can feel it"
Colli closed her eyes and her brows furrowed as she tried to feel the energy. suddenly her face lit up and she said "I can feel it ahri, what is that?" she asked
"That is your mana colli, the source of all magic. concentrate harder, try to channel the energy" Colli's brows creased in more concentration after a few seconds her face stopped all signs of pressure. it suddenly looked effortless, and an aura of magic flowed around her. "Whooaoh! ahri! im doing MAGIC! Holy. cow." Ahri smiled
"You seem to have gotten a grip on your mana, advanced mages always have this aura"
Colli looked suprised "Really? this doesnt seem that hard..." Ahri smiled wider "It means you have great talent colli, i guess it is my job to refine that talent! you shall be my student, i will teach you magic." Ahri looked triumphant.
"Wow!! Really ahri?!? you will do that for me? THANK. YOU!" Colli ran over and hugged ahri. "You sould go rest alittle, and practice your aura a bit more. the more you practice, the more effortless it becomes. you are advancing fast, you sould be able to keep the aura nonstop soon" Colli beamed with happiness, and said "See you later ahri!!" and skipped away happily, not unlike the way avi did. Ahri sighed contently and went out to go get some liver to eat with a smile.

END OF CHAPTER ONE
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