Zombielover99's Mod Application! (Updated)

[zombielover99]

GoldenLynx54 wrote:Go over it with a friend for punctuation, because there are several places that need periods or commas. And because of that, the middle part is practically a run-on sentence.

Is this better?
Ps thanks I checked it over and there were places to add better punctuation to.

[zombielover99]

Kalashnikov wrote:You're a great guy, honestly. The only problem is, you can be very immature at times. Try to keep your cool more, and not get so angry at people. You play on the server quite a bit, which is good. Also, consider going for Trusted first. Otherwise, Good Luck!

I am trusted XD

[BrookeTheSheep]

Be more active on the forums

[zombielover99]

Ok, I will thanks.

[BrookeTheSheep]

BTW, that does NOT mean to spam the forums with new topics, or reply to EVERYTHING. It just means to participate in conversation.

People have done that before.
For like a week.
Then they never use the forums again.

[zombielover99]

I know don't worry and I won't bump topics either.

[zombielover99]

Can someone tell me what I need to do to make the actual application better? I love advice!

[BrookeTheSheep]

The app is fine

[zombielover99]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:The app is fine

Ok that's awesome thanks Boo

[BrookeTheSheep]

hahahaha cause awesomeboo