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2014-08-07, 07:16 AM
Burritobrine1 wrote:
Cori83 wrote:Why doesn't this have paragraphs? >.<

:lol: xD Grammar police! (That is a complement lol)


I can't read it, it has no organizational structure >.<

It's talking about people, then redstone, then suddenly Gryph's dirt shrine and being jailed. It makes the application hard to read and understand and thus critique in a helpful manner.
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Staff application - by xXTheDarkGamerXx - 2014-07-29, 06:17 PM
Staff application - by Metazard - 2014-07-29, 08:11 PM
Staff application - by Metazard - 2014-07-29, 08:12 PM
Staff application - by Lord_Nick - 2014-07-29, 10:39 PM
Staff application - by 1258933 - 2014-07-31, 08:49 AM
Staff application - by Burritobrine1 - 2014-08-04, 07:03 PM
Staff application - by Cori83 - 2014-08-06, 03:05 PM
Staff application - by Burritobrine1 - 2014-08-06, 11:11 PM
Staff application - by Burritobrine1 - 2014-08-06, 11:11 PM
Staff application - by Cori83 - 2014-08-07, 07:16 AM
Staff application - by challenger410 - 2014-08-11, 11:30 AM

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