2014-07-01, 11:19 PM
Lets run it through the guidelines CLEARLY outlined as the first topic of the thread.
1. Explain why you think you deserve Trusted - Yep, but explain more
2. Explain what you will do as a Trusted member. - Nope
3. Use proper grammar, don't use text shortcuts like "bcuz" and "U" say "because" and "you" - Spelling is almost spot on, but the grammar is terrible.
4. Capitalize the first word of every sentence, and capitalize names and when "I" is by itself, no "i" - You failed at this
5. Make your app long, put a lot of effort into this app. -Nope
6. Explain how you found the server, and why you like the server. - Nope
7. No run on sentences, punctuate every sentence, with a period, question mark, or exclamation - both of the sentences in this are run on sentences
8. Don't exaggerate your emotions, like spamming those emoticons, or using a lot of exclamation mark. - 4 smiley faces... seriously?
9. Use spell check. If you can't spell well, I would recommend using spell check once, and continuously keep typing the word until you can spell it correctly. - You did spell everything right
10. Make sure you include your full in-game name with your app, or you won't get promoted. - Nope
So, to answer the question:
1. Explain why you think you deserve Trusted - Yep, but explain more
2. Explain what you will do as a Trusted member. - Nope
3. Use proper grammar, don't use text shortcuts like "bcuz" and "U" say "because" and "you" - Spelling is almost spot on, but the grammar is terrible.
4. Capitalize the first word of every sentence, and capitalize names and when "I" is by itself, no "i" - You failed at this
5. Make your app long, put a lot of effort into this app. -Nope
6. Explain how you found the server, and why you like the server. - Nope
7. No run on sentences, punctuate every sentence, with a period, question mark, or exclamation - both of the sentences in this are run on sentences
8. Don't exaggerate your emotions, like spamming those emoticons, or using a lot of exclamation mark. - 4 smiley faces... seriously?
9. Use spell check. If you can't spell well, I would recommend using spell check once, and continuously keep typing the word until you can spell it correctly. - You did spell everything right
10. Make sure you include your full in-game name with your app, or you won't get promoted. - Nope
So, to answer the question:
redstonemastr wrote: I hope this good enough