2014-02-08, 08:55 PM
Okay, Nick, this is getting much better. Organization nearly fixed. Three things left.
1.) I don't enjoy reading bright blue, red, or yellow text. It's painful. All black text please <3
2.)All of the paragraph-separating dashes should be on the left side, because that will look nicer.
3.) Still some small errors with commas if you want to fix them, but not required for Cori to vouch.
Okay. I think that's it. Good luck!
1.) I don't enjoy reading bright blue, red, or yellow text. It's painful. All black text please <3
2.)All of the paragraph-separating dashes should be on the left side, because that will look nicer.
3.) Still some small errors with commas if you want to fix them, but not required for Cori to vouch.
Okay. I think that's it. Good luck!