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Jelly's Staff App
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#11
2014-01-30, 01:46 AM
You need to work on these things;

-Grammar

-Turn the i's into I's

-Capitalize new sentances

-Use more punctuation

Good luck!
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Jelly's Staff App - by JellyfishLord - 2014-01-06, 10:54 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by mattjtv - 2014-01-06, 10:55 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by JellyfishLord - 2014-01-06, 10:57 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by mattjtv - 2014-01-06, 11:00 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by JellyfishLord - 2014-01-06, 11:07 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by Metazard - 2014-01-06, 11:08 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by mattjtv - 2014-01-06, 11:09 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by tobiii1004 - 2014-01-06, 11:19 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by JellyfishLord - 2014-01-29, 10:31 PM
Jelly's Staff App - by Metazard - 2014-01-30, 12:34 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by zombielover99 - 2014-01-30, 01:46 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by xXSlurpieXx - 2014-01-30, 04:38 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by zombielover99 - 2014-01-30, 09:40 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by challenger410 - 2014-01-30, 10:57 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by xXSlurpieXx - 2014-01-30, 10:59 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by mattjtv - 2014-01-30, 11:41 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by zombielover99 - 2014-01-30, 11:47 AM
Jelly's Staff App - by Qu3sti0nMark - 2014-01-30, 03:41 PM
Jelly's Staff App - by Qu3sti0nMark - 2014-01-30, 03:42 PM
Jelly's Staff App - by challenger410 - 2014-01-30, 06:44 PM
Jelly's Staff App - by JellyfishLord - 2014-08-25, 08:09 PM

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