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Williamsayshello ban appeal
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2014-01-28, 04:22 AM
This is a pretty good appeal, here's what I'd suggest:

-Change the i's to I's (I think that the if you do this the app will be 2x better, I cant stand i's)

-There are a couple spelling and grammar issues, fix them.

-You don't have to go too in depth, but please explain why you want back on the server, you only mentioned what you wont do, not what you will/want to do.

If you do all of this the appeal will be pitch perfect in my books, good luck! <img src=" title="Smile">
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Williamsayshello ban appeal - by williamsayshello - 2014-01-11, 02:38 PM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by williamsayshello - 2014-01-18, 04:17 PM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by mattjtv - 2014-01-18, 04:20 PM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by Beast0262 - 2014-01-18, 07:12 PM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by game_jacker - 2014-01-19, 06:18 AM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by kittens1234 - 2014-01-19, 07:59 AM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by mattjtv - 2014-01-19, 09:11 AM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by challenger410 - 2014-01-19, 01:13 PM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by tobiii1004 - 2014-01-20, 05:34 AM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by zombielover99 - 2014-01-28, 04:22 AM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by mattjtv - 2014-01-28, 09:16 AM
Williamsayshello ban appeal - by zombielover99 - 2014-01-28, 12:38 PM

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