2014-01-23, 03:24 PM
zombielover99 wrote:hailstorm wrote:Metazard wrote:Whenever you start off a book, you want to set the scene, for example
"It was a rainy day in (town name)"
But you'll want to expand it more
Your book jumps straight into it, which is not good
Try not to use 'said' at all use more exciting words like
Sam whimpered
Sam chuckled
Sam moaned
Sam complained
Sam snapped
Stuff like that, gotta keep it interesting.
Eh, I disagree. Thats too cliché.
Make up your mind, is it a setting or no setting *facepalm*
You describe the setting later, it's perfect.
