2014-01-22, 07:59 PM
I literally told you to clean up the sentences, and you put it through a spell checker....
Look at my previous advice comment on ways to improve, rather than asking people who are just going to tell you the exact thing. You added a paragraph, yes, but it is useless, and it is just there to fill space. Gimme a moment, and I'll edit your application so it contains only useful information.
Hi, My name is 1258933.
That is literally it. Fix it, and we'll talk
Look at my previous advice comment on ways to improve, rather than asking people who are just going to tell you the exact thing. You added a paragraph, yes, but it is useless, and it is just there to fill space. Gimme a moment, and I'll edit your application so it contains only useful information.
Hi, My name is 1258933.
That is literally it. Fix it, and we'll talk