2014-01-20, 05:34 AM
Most of the appeal is good! However there are just a FEW mistakes with spelling and grammar, and fixing them would help a bit.
I'm sorry haha, I'm a firm believer in that better grammar makes a better impression.
Best of luck, stay patient!
I'm sorry haha, I'm a firm believer in that better grammar makes a better impression.
Best of luck, stay patient!
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