2014-01-20, 05:32 AM
Alright, here's my critique, haha.
I'm not all that familiar with you, or what you did, and to staff, it's important we know what you did. I would suggest more development on why you're banned. It would help a lot, with clarifying the reasons and such.
Now, I'm sure everyone will say this at one point or another, but PLEASE fix all of your grammatical errors. Excellent grammar makes you sound serious and polished, and it makes the appeal much easier for us to read.
Try to refrain from using phrases like "bad things", "making this ban appeal rock right now", or "stupid thing", if you substitute in a more mature phrase, it would make you sound more polished, just like fixing your grammar would.
If you need any more help, you can PM me or any other staff here on the forums, or you can get your friend on the server to PM one of us as well. I understand that you've been asking your friend to repetitively ask kittens1234, the Admin, for advice on the appeal. I would suggest you ask other members on staff as well, for a more rounded opinion.
Best of luck!
I'm not all that familiar with you, or what you did, and to staff, it's important we know what you did. I would suggest more development on why you're banned. It would help a lot, with clarifying the reasons and such.
Now, I'm sure everyone will say this at one point or another, but PLEASE fix all of your grammatical errors. Excellent grammar makes you sound serious and polished, and it makes the appeal much easier for us to read.
Try to refrain from using phrases like "bad things", "making this ban appeal rock right now", or "stupid thing", if you substitute in a more mature phrase, it would make you sound more polished, just like fixing your grammar would.
If you need any more help, you can PM me or any other staff here on the forums, or you can get your friend on the server to PM one of us as well. I understand that you've been asking your friend to repetitively ask kittens1234, the Admin, for advice on the appeal. I would suggest you ask other members on staff as well, for a more rounded opinion.
Best of luck!
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