CCoes's Mod App (Edited!)

[CCoesBruins]

XxL3GiTSkULLzxX7 wrote:

CCoesBruins wrote:Hi. My name is Charlie, and I am here today to apply for the staff rank Moderator.

WHY DO YOU WANT THE RANK?

I want this rank so I can help people on the forums and the server with the abilities of Mod. I want to help people on McTopia with jailing, Building, and More. I fell like Mod would be great for me! I love McTopia, and I will do everything in my power to help the server!

HOW LONG HAVE YOU BEEN A MCTOPIAN?

I have been on this server for about 4 months. I know, not long, but I think I have mastered being a true helper on the server. I have had a couple ranks other than SuperDonor. VIP Gold, and VIP Obsidian.

FRIENDS AND HEROES?
Friends: I have a lot of friends on McTopia, thanks to their welcoming and polite attitudes. I think I am lucky to have Rachel4526, Tobiii1004, Slurpie, Tuneforever, Zombielover, Emmy, NikolasDude, Bk, BonerLogic, Leigh, and Varstar as my best friends, considering they are very nice to me. They welcome me whenever I log onto McTopia.
My biggest Hero: NikolasDude. He has helped me since the day I joined McTopia. He gives me advice and always talks to me. I am proud to be friends with Nik.

ACHIEVEMENTS?

Well, I will admit, I built an end spawn, a town, a jail, and more stuff. I have also been helping people like Chloejanew and abab build things. People often ask for things from me. Of course I make them pay iron for each product. (I NEVER Sell god equipment.) I also own a shop and I am town admin for Two different towns.

Conclusion:
Well, I really hope this app gets accepted. I now make an oath:
I will NOT Abuse my power.
I will NOT be rude to lower or higher ranks.
I will ALWAYS Help people no matter what!
I will help with jails, and kicks and what not.
Thanks for reading my Mod App! Please Consider!

-Dr.Coes

I want you to make these answers a bit more longer, but so far right now, I honestly don't think you are ready for Moderator, sorry. If I can see you changing some things in your app, I could rethink this answer out for ya.

Idk how my answers aren't clear enough?