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Mod app (I think edited!)
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2013-03-12, 07:33 AM
BrookeTheSheep wrote:
BrookeTheSheep wrote:
Aheadjeffrey wrote:OK. I was hoping for mod. I don't really care if I'm childish; I just really like to have fun with kids! (I'm around kids a lot.) So, I am giving this a chance.
I am really nice and always follow rules. I am VIP-Gold and I am enjoying it.
With mod, I will make stuff in flat world like I want to. (yes of course.) I'd like Mod mostly because I love this server very much.
I have invited 4 people: Manicman99, Ashball1337, Ashball125, and Hatman365. I've made a lot of friends like Kittens1234, kittycatface, MonsterGeek, Bkreitz, Lord Nickolas, Kris_Nickel, Corallightbulb, SilverWolf, Aaron I think, and many more.
I'll use the commands for good, to protect the server, and to tell people to make sure to follow rules.
I think I've been playing this server for 8 months. I've been jailed 3 or 4 times for home killing and killing in their mines.
So, I hope I get it! Be welcome to post comments! <img src=" title="Very Happy">



I found around 25 mistakes, and fixed most of them. Your grammar wasn't very good, and some sentences lacked structure entirely. A few sentences made so little sense, that I removed them altogether.

She just gave you the freaking fixed version...
ask for help

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Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-02-19, 02:46 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by GoldenLynx54 - 2013-02-20, 01:25 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Metazard - 2013-02-20, 09:09 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-02-20, 11:15 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by GoldenLynx54 - 2013-02-20, 11:43 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by BrookeTheSheep - 2013-02-20, 12:11 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by challenger410 - 2013-02-20, 02:21 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by GoldenLynx54 - 2013-02-20, 02:29 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by BrookeTheSheep - 2013-02-20, 02:49 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by UW4BCS - 2013-02-20, 05:06 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by challenger410 - 2013-02-20, 07:30 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-02-24, 02:04 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-05, 10:00 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Metazard - 2013-03-05, 10:05 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-09, 08:42 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by BrookeTheSheep - 2013-03-09, 09:53 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-11, 06:24 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by BrookeTheSheep - 2013-03-11, 06:30 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by SilverWolf101 - 2013-03-11, 07:16 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-12, 02:48 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by kittens1234 - 2013-03-12, 07:33 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-13, 04:38 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-13, 04:39 AM

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