2013-02-20, 05:06 PM
I found around 25 mistakes, and fixed most of them. Your grammar wasn't very good, and some sentences lacked structure entirely. A few sentances made so little sense, that I removed them altogether.[/quote]
Counter-Grammar Nazi!
*sentences[/quote][/quote]
Spelling and grammar are two entirely different things. lol.
In my defense, I while I was typing that, my mom got home, and we found out she doesn't have breast cancer. I was a bit preoccupied.
Awesome
" title="Smile">, glad to hear your mom is cancer free!
Hmm seeing if your mom is cancer free > A mod application. Sorry to go off topic
Counter-Grammar Nazi!
*sentences[/quote][/quote]
Spelling and grammar are two entirely different things. lol.
In my defense, I while I was typing that, my mom got home, and we found out she doesn't have breast cancer. I was a bit preoccupied.
Awesome
Hmm seeing if your mom is cancer free > A mod application. Sorry to go off topic




