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Mod app (I think edited!)
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2013-02-20, 05:06 PM
I found around 25 mistakes, and fixed most of them. Your grammar wasn't very good, and some sentences lacked structure entirely. A few sentances made so little sense, that I removed them altogether.[/quote]
Counter-Grammar Nazi!
*sentences[/quote][/quote]
Spelling and grammar are two entirely different things. lol.
In my defense, I while I was typing that, my mom got home, and we found out she doesn't have breast cancer. I was a bit preoccupied.
Awesome <img src=" title="Smile">, glad to hear your mom is cancer free!
Hmm seeing if your mom is cancer free > A mod application. Sorry to go off topic
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Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-02-19, 02:46 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by GoldenLynx54 - 2013-02-20, 01:25 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Metazard - 2013-02-20, 09:09 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-02-20, 11:15 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by GoldenLynx54 - 2013-02-20, 11:43 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by BrookeTheSheep - 2013-02-20, 12:11 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by challenger410 - 2013-02-20, 02:21 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by GoldenLynx54 - 2013-02-20, 02:29 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by BrookeTheSheep - 2013-02-20, 02:49 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by UW4BCS - 2013-02-20, 05:06 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by challenger410 - 2013-02-20, 07:30 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-02-24, 02:04 PM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-05, 10:00 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Metazard - 2013-03-05, 10:05 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-09, 08:42 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by BrookeTheSheep - 2013-03-09, 09:53 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-11, 06:24 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by BrookeTheSheep - 2013-03-11, 06:30 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by SilverWolf101 - 2013-03-11, 07:16 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-12, 02:48 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by kittens1234 - 2013-03-12, 07:33 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-13, 04:38 AM
Mod app (I think edited!) - by Aheadjeffrey - 2013-03-13, 04:39 AM

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