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Case_meister wrote:Hi I am Case_meister
I would LOVE to be a mod because I can help more people. I am cind to all nice to all and I help people all the time (alot)
Like some people that i help are challenger, kaykay and alot more people. I help if it is under water cave anything and i dont stop till they are happy " title="Very Happy">
(but it is hard to do all of that because i cant breave under water or i get stuck in the cave) " title="Sad">
But I dont stop I try to do the best that i can do to help these people in all my power t McTopia.
I would also LOVE to be part of the staff to help even MORE " title="Very Happy">
So please think of my words for me to be a mod " title="Smile">
You wont regret it you would be happy

Hi, I am Case_meister (You needed a comma there)

Maybe to stress the LOVE you could put it in italics (LOVE)

Kind to all, nice to all and I help people all the time. (Spelt kind wrong, you needed a comma after all because you are listing and because you said you help people all the time, you don't need to put a lot in brackets after it. Oh and a lot isn't two words, it's one.

Some people that I help are; Challenger, kaykay (use at least one more person, it's better in threes) (Again, a lot is two words, not one)

I will help if it is an underwater cave or anything really, I wont stop till they are happy " title="Very Happy"> (What do you mean if it is an underwater cave? How do you help them?) (Some more grammatical errors too.)

(But it is hard to do these things because I can't breathe under water or I get lost and stuck in the cave, godmode would help me a lot.) (You spelt breathe wrong and when you say something, we aren't in your head, you need to explain, or communicate as some teachers say, your ideas so we can understand)

Now I'm not going to do all of this for you but please, spend a lot of time into this, fix all of your grammar and communicate what you're saying.