REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[SilverWolf101]

tobiii1004 wrote:

SilverWolf101 wrote:I was playing outside with the rest of the family. Little Sparky ran off to the woods, however no one noticed until it was the next day. I was very upset. Ahri said he was gone for too long so he would be far away. I wanted to look for him, so I ran away. I climbed through the trees. The leaves tickled me and I woont come back until I find Sparky, my prince. I came across a vine that lead down into a little clearing. it seemed magical, enchanted. There was the vine I climbed down and a few ropes hanging down too. there was a little flower in bloom. Sticks littered the ground. There was a rock, a special rock. Want to know what made it special? a beam of light came through the trees to shine on it, but on it, was Sparky. I dashed and hugged him. He hugged me with his wings. I turned around to look at the clearing.
"I could make something of this..." I thought.
"I could make this my kingdom. The kingdom of Quartara!" I shouted. No one could hear me here. Good. I did pack some supplies when I ran off. I had paper, apples, a stick, some rocks.... Paper! I have paper. I quickly mapped how to get here.
I picked up the sticks from the ground and began to make a little hut. I used some magic I learned from Colli's book to help me. I named the flower the blossom of Quartara. Here, Sparky really could be my prince. Not just a prince, my knight. Prince Tutsoya.
"Next time," I thought. "I will sneak back here and bring more supplies" . I gestured Sparky to follow and we headed back home.
"I got Sparky! al by myself!" I shouted. a tiny echo went through the house.
"Great!" Some said.
"Good to have you back Sparky!" Others said.
That's night I planned what to do with my kingdom. I will sneak things from the house, and I will use magic to help me make my kingdom prosper. I hid my things and went to sleep. the next morning I asked if I could have two wood swords, one or me and one for Sparky. I made myself look cute and Made me seem like I would do nothing wrong. The said yes and I got to tie a smaller wood sword onto Sparky's back. Sorta to make him look Prince like. It wasn't in the way of his wings of course.
"I'm going for a walk in the woods!" I tell Ahri.
"Okay" I grab my things from my room and make sure no one sees me with them. I make it to the forest and follow my map. I made it to he clearing. I look up from my map.
"What?! it's not here!!!!" I got very worried. have I lost my kingdom? I climb up into the trees and have Sparky follow.
"What?"
The vine was right in front of me.
"Hmmmm...." I say. I climb down into the clearing and look at all my stuff. I brought one of my presents, I little knife. I carve a Q into the biggest tree. Sparky climbs onto the rock. his throne I thought. I saw some other rocks and pushed them in place to make MY throne. There was a fat bitch branch sitting on the ground. Time to test my skills. I stand in front of it and start my spell. I close focus on the branch and close my eyes. I open them to see the branch carved, how I imagined. I picked it up.
"My staff." I thought. I used the knife to carve designs onto the sides. There was a hole, a large hole, probably made my a dog digging something up. I put my special things in there for safe keeping.
I climb up the vine and look back at my kingdom.
"Goodbye my kingdom. I shall see you when the sun rises" I whisper. I climb up and Sparky follows. We head back to the house.
"This is MY secret. No one shall know unless I tell them. And no one WILL find it.... Because it has a spell on it, a spell I didn't cast though. You can only locate it through the trees." I thought. I go to bed early, dreaming about my kingdom.
The kingdom of Quartara

Awesome(: but um, a FAT BIRCH BRANCH, not a FAT BITCH BRANCH...

Autocorrect.... (I actually made a new language SO I CAN SWEAR WITHOUT ANYONE KNOWING! Oops) you idioot.
Not gonna use it =3