REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[GoldenLynx54]

I was worried about Chives and James. Sure, I didn't really like them but they were family. Flicking my bushy tail, I climbed up the stairs. I couldn't stand to see James in such a state. I slam into my door and get a purple bruise on my forehead. "Owwww." Quickly pushing through the squeaky door, I sit on my bed. My head throbbed with pain, and I quickly spied a paper. reaching towards it, I realize what it is. It was a drawing I had had for a while, one I had made when I was cast out.

It was a picture of me and Aurora. Suddenly I was filled to the brim with grief. I haven't seen Mum in a while. I've heard slight whispers in my dreams, a blur of orange fur in the woods, but she hasn't visited for a while. I missed her very much.

My entire being was filled with grief; from not seeing Aurora, James being almost dead, and Fay being gone. In fact, I think my heart left with Fay. I personally don't like the name Fay, but I call her that out of respect. I would cry, but my tears ran out. There was so much loss. Even seeing all the leaves fall in a rainbow of reds and oranges didn't comfort me.

I felt like my life had crumbled. There wasn't a shred of happiness, only loss. taking my diary out, I peered inside. I read entry after entry, until I came to the last- and the shortest.

"Aurora isn't here."

I stuffed the dusty book into the chest, and turned back to my bed. I wasn't aware of anyone around me so I was going to go to sleep. I hope. My bruise wasn't throbbing now and I was slipping up the ladder to my top bunk when my hand brushed something. My paper on the Paw Stars. I took it out and uncrumpled it. I smiled; it was exactly how I left it.

Climbing up to the bunk bed, I peer out the window. A full moon stood protectively in the sky, watching the stars. Glimpsing a constellation of bright stars, I instantly notice something new. It wasn't one constellation. It was many.

There was a whole trail of paw prints, leading away from the house and into the woods. the trees glowed with an unearthly white, giving the woods a ghostly feel. somehow it reminded me of Purity. Not Fay, Purity.

I was now under a weird trance. Maybe Purity WAS there! Then I could find her, and be a hero! Quickly I packed things. Compass, cookies, a spell book, and my secret charm.

I set out through the window with a rope, and when I landed onto the leaves I breathed in the cold air. I would find her. I was finding Purity!