REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

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After they left, I shrank into girl form.

Everyone sort of stared at me, shocked.

"Alice..." Someone called. I didn't answer, I was still burning anger from Fear's disrespect towards Fay.

Speaking of Fay, where was she?!

"Give me a second to calm down..." I pointed my finger at them...then my legs swayed and I blacked out. Jack rushed to help me.

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I woke next to the fire. My usual spot. Soon it would be too warm to sit by the fire. Jack was sitting next to my sleeping form, petting my ears.

He laughed. "My vicious little Platinara." He kissed my head. "That was quite a transformation. You alright?" He knew I was alright, though. He was a dragon himself, he knew that I would be fine.

I smiled sleepily. "Of course I'm fine."

I frowned. "But where's Fay?"

He smiled. "You really treat her like a sister." I nodded. "Any girl in this family is my sister. Any boy is my brother. I'll defend them all."

He sighed and rolled his eyes. "You Platinaras are so defensive sometimes..." he winked, a sure sign he was just joking around.

I closed my eyes again, at peace. Then I remembered Fay. Again.

"I do wonder where she is, though...I hope nothing happened to her. I haven't seen her since I turned into a dragon..."

"Yeah. She hates me, but I think she's nice. She probably thinks I hate her." He chuckled.

"She sure loves James a lot." I smiled at the memories of them together.

"Yeah. It reminds me of you and me." He said this corny comment because he knows that romantic and cheesy things annoy me. I slapped his leg. Or at least tried to. The slap came out pitiful and weak because I was tired.

"No cheesy comments."

He held up his hands in mock surrender. "Alright."

"Her and James are so cute."

Wait.

James!

"Is everyone alright? Specifically James, he seemed to be in pretty bad condition." Worry lines creased my forehead.

"Shh...calm down. You need to rest. Everyone is fine. Avi is so happy her wings grew in." He smiled in a very big-brotherly like way. Around my family, he was losing his cool outer shell. He was being nice and warm. I liked it that way.

His smile faded, though. "James...well..." He removed his hands from my bunny ears and put them in his lap. He twiddled his thumbs.

"Yes?" I was worried. James was a good guy. He was good to everyone, specifically Fay. We got off to a rough start but we were friends now. At least I think.

"He's..."

"What, Jack?" I was getting more concerned by the second.

"James is dead."

And a moment of shock slapped me.