REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[kittens1234]

After I helped Fay out, I jumped onto the roof. Imeditly, I felt dizzy, like in my dream. I heard Alice or Talon become a dragon and everyone leave, but It felt like It wasn't really there.I felt weak, and cold.Human.
I stumbled over the cornor, and a man apeared, with a stake. In the back of my mind, I knew I was going to die. My dream was coming true. Even if I felt human, I could still scream.
"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"
I heard footsteps, but the stake came down. Some last minute instinct happened, or someone threw me out of the way, but I was falling, still human, off a three story house. I hit the ground feet first. I heard a crack.
I sat down hard on my tailbone.
Another crack.
I put my hands to my head.
Blood.
Vampires don't bleed.

I looked up and saw someone falling, too weak to move, I struggled to get out of the way.

Ow. My ribs, now, were also broken. It was the man with the stake, and the glowing stick. Ahri was coming now, I could feel her footsteps in the earth. The ground was shaking, moving. A figure in a yellow t-shirt jumped off the roof and landed on the man's back. The stick broke, the glow faded. I felt normal. I healed instantly.
Cal, my savior, on the other hand, could not.
I picked up the man.

"Who are you"

"Shes gonna get you, you know. She hates you, for what you did to her...shes gonna get.." His voice faded off into nothing as he turned into ash.
Magic.
Amber.
Amber.
I fainted.