REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[SilverWolf101]

kittens1234 wrote:

SilverWolf101 wrote:

kittens1234 wrote:OMG
WHEN YOU COPY HALF THE STORY INTO WORD, ITS 83 PAGES, AND ITS STILL COUNTING THE WORDS XD
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
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MKAY.
SO IN ONE OF THE FIRST CHAPTERS, GOLDEN WRITES I'M GONNA GO PLAY WITH ELLA NOW, BUT WHOS ELLA :O
I'M GONNA KEEP ASKING QUESTIONS LIKE THIS, IM STRINGING THE STORY TOGETHER :O
FYI THE WORD COUNT IS AT 32359
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I found an error. Alice, or Talon, when she first came to the house, i was with her in Spirit Land. And she was like there. Watching me. In the real world/

WHA....
NO, SEE REMEBER, PENIGRINE OR WHOEVER IS PRETENDING TO BE TALON, THAT CLEARS IT UP
SO ITS NOT REALLY TALON, ITS PENIGRINE

lol. But didnt Tobii say something about Alice feeling guilty about possessng Avi and stuff? Or am i just being stupid