REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[kittens1234]

SilverWolf101 wrote:

kittens1234 wrote:OMG
WHEN YOU COPY HALF THE STORY INTO WORD, ITS 83 PAGES, AND ITS STILL COUNTING THE WORDS XD
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
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MKAY.
SO IN ONE OF THE FIRST CHAPTERS, GOLDEN WRITES I'M GONNA GO PLAY WITH ELLA NOW, BUT WHOS ELLA :O
I'M GONNA KEEP ASKING QUESTIONS LIKE THIS, IM STRINGING THE STORY TOGETHER :O
FYI THE WORD COUNT IS AT 32359
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I found an error. Alice, or Talon, when she first came to the house, i was with her in Spirit Land. And she was like there. Watching me. In the real world/

WHA....
NO, SEE REMEBER, PENIGRINE OR WHOEVER IS PRETENDING TO BE TALON, THAT CLEARS IT UP
SO ITS NOT REALLY TALON, ITS PENIGRINE