REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

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BrookeTheSheep wrote:"Your name is Jack, right?" I said.
"Yeah. I'm Talon's boyfriend," he replied.
"Well, we are Alice's family. Back off. You didn't get my approval," I said, defiantly steeping towards him.
"Do I need it?" Jack countered.
"Yes," I snapped back, taking another step forward, my nose inches away from his.
Then Jack reached out, and punched me in the face.
James had him in a headlock in seconds.
"You touch her one more time, and I will snap your neck" James said.
"Ah- S- sorry" Jack spluttered.
James released him.
Ahri, Avi, and Coli were all over Alice in no time. She had her head resting on a pillow, and was laying by the fireplace within a minute.
James had his arm tightly around me, and was holding a bag of ice to my eye, where Jack punched me. It wasn't a hard punch, more like a warning. I was still getting a bruise.
Jack sat awkwardly at the table.
James and I were discussing my new name. We had a few ideas.
Ahri, Avi, and Coli were talking to eachother about what just happened.
Jack picked moss of the table.
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Epic ending, right? I love moss xD
Anyway, I'll make a poll for Pure's new name. We will pick a top 2, and i'll pick from there.

AIGHT I AIN'T APPROVING OF THAT

edit jack. He's not one to punch people.... Please!!!!! XD



Please boo...I'm serious this is actually kind of botherin me. T.T