REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[SilverWolf101]

BrookeTheSheep wrote:~PURITY'S POV~
I woke up in a cold sweat.
"Chives, could yo-" I started.
"Chives?! Where are you?!?" I shouted. He LEFT me. Alone. At this point, I realized leaving was a mistake. I started to run back home to find Chives, and James.
I arrived at the front door, exhausted. After I caught my breath, I saw blood on the ground. Chives' blood.
"No. NO!" I cried, starting to cry.
A heard footsteps, and the door unlock and open. Then, standing in the doorway, guess who i saw?
James.
He had a pack with supplies in it. I was filled with relief.
Without hesitating, I walked over and put my head on his shoulder.
"Pure... Pure, its ok. You are ok. Chives is here. He had a fight with Ahri, but he is fine. I was just going to go look for you. Shhh... Everything is ok..." he whispered soothingly.
With his arm wrapped tightly around me, he walked me up to Chives. He was in my room, on my bed.
"Pure!" Ahri, Emma, and Coli called. Then ran over for a hug, but I didn't even look at them.
"I'm... I'm sorry, Pure. I didn't mean harm..." Ahri stuttered.
"It's ok Ahri. As long as Chives is ok, it is ok" I said.
But... It wasn't ok. I doubt Ahri and I would be the same.
I realized something. I LIED. I just lied. Being with James is depleting my pureness, but I don't care. He is my True One.
Chives sat up, and I shook my head. I sat next to him, and wrapped my arms around his neck.
"You need to stop getting yourself into trouble." I said to him while laugh-crying.
"Ok, everyone. I need to tell you some things." I told my family.
I told them about me, about my kingdom, how it fell, and about my True One. And that my True One was James.
They all seemed accepting.
"We have something to say too." Coli said to me.
She told me about everything. Alice, the dragon, Talon. Everything.
I was shocked.
"I... I need a moment." I stuttered.
I ran outside. James was close behind me.
I sat down on the ground, and fought back tears.
I have been crying a lot lately...
Suddenly, two tall men wearing animal skin clothing walked over.
"Hello, Purity." one of them said.
The other picked me out, and hoisted me over his shoulder. I kicked and punched them, but it was like they were made of iron. I couldn't hurt them.
"You are coming with us." the one not carrying me said. "We can't kill you, or permanently damage you, but you still feel pain."
"NO!" James screamed, turning into a lion.
The whole family was outside in no time, trying to stop the men.
The last thing I remember is the men running away, faster then humanly possible, and James' blue eyes. Then they knocked me out.
Always his eyes.
Always.

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