REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[SilverWolf101]

GemuFoxxx wrote:What a shame, i was getting REALLY attatched to little sparky, but i knew it would be alot of trouble, i already have too many mouths to feed... but avi loved him more. she didnt have to take care of him, he was going to be her best friend! I thought about my priorities. Avi crying, James standing there, Alice running up the stairs, and pure being dragged away by chives. i choode pure, and i gave emma a look suggesting she had better come with me. I strode over and grabbed pure's hand, as emma grabbed chive's shoulder.
"Excuse me chives, but where do you think you are going with MY child?" I said protectively
"YOUR child? YOU didnt give birth to her. YOU didnt take care of her until our city in the sky fell" he replied angrily.
"But I TOOK CARE of her when she was cast out of the world. abandoned by her own kind, not even going out of their way to find her!" my tails whipped around angrilly, and my orb summoned by my other hand. it was glowing deep red, angry. and looking for blood.
"Oh, so you want to scrap MUTT?" he sneered at me
"I Dont think you want to take your chances with me, CHIVES. and i dont think Emma wants to either." I gave a glance at emma, waving her off. She grabbed pure, who looked conflicted, and walked away. Poor pure, she is mature but its hard for anybody to go through this.
"So what do you want to do BOTTOMFEEDER?" his stance looking ready to fight. i stayed calm, and i replied.
"If you want to fight, you are sealing your own fate. but can we not do this in here? if the house gets messed up i am using your insurance money to pay for it." he sneered and walked outside, ready to fight. i wondered how i would do this, both pure AND Emma would be heartbroken if i killed him, i will have to leave him alive enough to get back to his home. I walked out with my orb floating behind me.
"Would you like to make the first move chives? i want you to have a bit of an advantage against me, dont want it being too easy do we?" he was holding a greatsword. it was quite big and impressive, a fine weapon! probably cost alot of money to make, and to buy, its a shame he wont get to use it in this fight.

My orb turned pink, and formed a heart shape, i threw it at him. when it hit, he staggered back a bit, and started walking twords me, entranced with deep love for me. I Made my fox fires rotate around me and rushed to his side, one of my fox fires hit him, and he got hit by my dash magic. He got out of the trance as i dashed above him, another fox fire hit him, and the dash magic hit him once more. i threw my orb at him from above, and dashed to the ground behind him. my last fox fire and dash magic hit him, and he fell as the orb hit him on its way back. This all happened in about 5 seconds. i DID warn him of my power... he was on the ground, still alive, but alive enough to speak. I looked over, and i saw colli. looking breath taken at the show of skill i displayed.
"Colli? can you please help me patch him up? i need him to get back to his tribe and tell the rest of his kind that pure is OURS. and we wont give her up without a fight." Colli took a second to get over to us, and my orb turned green as it healed him. i let her perform the medical treatments that magic could not. snapping his bones back into place so they didnt mend crooked and such.
"Why..are you healing me?..." he rasped in a hoarse voice.
"Because if i killed you pure would NEVER forgive me." i replied. and added emma in my own head with a hint of smugness
"And we also need you to tell your tribe that pure will only come back on her free will, and that we will not give her up without a fight, and that was just ME alone, you are very lucky i didnt kill you, i have always wanted to taste a bit of siren soul..." When he was fully healed, he got up and gave me a look of trepidation,
"You are allowed to visit" colli said, "We do not mean war with your people" she gave him a smile, no flirtatiousness intended. even SHE knew that he was emma's. I Gave him a little hug, to tell him that no hard feelings were intended. and to my suprise, he returned it too. after he left i looked over at the house, and i saw emma's furious jealousy burning through the window and giggled to myself.
"Colli, can you please tell her that i did not mean to flirt with him?" i said smiling.
"why cant you tell her?" Colli asked.
"I dont think i can go near her without risking my life, i dont think even I can take down emma when shes mad..."

And looking out the window was Sparky and Avi cheering Ahri on. XD