REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[GoldenLynx54]

Gathered round Alice at the small but strong fire was weird. I never saw my bunny so pale, her eyes so...red. Scarlet even. after she left, then came down again with a smile, I knew something was wrong. she wouldn't leave to come back. well, if she is allergic then I HAVE to get rid of that egg! Running up to my room as the sun rose into a position above the house, I then threw down tons of books. looking for one book. "Dragon Encyclopedia" was its name and I looked EVERYWHERE for it. I still found it hard to believe this house had so many books. Throwing the last book on the ground, I sigh. Now I remember. Ahri took my "Dragon Encyclopedia" from me and stored it in her room. HER ROOM. Nobody had been in there yet. In fact, it was down in the basement. Calling over to Purity, I ask her where Ahri is now. "Ahri? I think she went out hunting for chickens. Left about a minute ago." Purity still sounded perfect as always. "Thanks Pure!" I said. Rushing out, I added, "And be a sis and clean up my stuff!" Purity glanced at my floor, grimacing. "This will take a while..." Starting to put the books back, she looked at titles. Setting aside a few books of her own, she continued. I ran down to the cracked, mossy dining table and turned to the bottom of the stairs. Standing there, cold and menacing, were two iron doors. Locked. Sadly they weren't cracked or old, as Ahri had replaced them with strong doors. I wonder why. Peeking around the staircase, I took a small chunk of cold pork. Last minute I decided to warm it by the fire. Emma was there, watching the egg with curiosity. Relizing I was there, she said, "I wonder what kind it is." Mumbling, I said, "Me too." I was wary of her because, well, who wouldn't be of a vampire? Her red eyes weren't what scared me. It was her gleaming white fangs, capable of drinking my blood just like that. "You don't have to be scared of me Colli." She had noticed my quivering body. Wow she was smart. "I can't help it." I whispered as quietly as I could. Placing a comforting pale hand on my shoulder, she smiled revealing her fangs. Screaming, I ran away with my food terrified. Purity, Alice, and Avi came to see all the commotion. "S-sorry. Emm scared me." Plastering my fake smile, I hoped they would believe it. Purity knew what had really happened when Emma came out of the library looking downcast. I backed away to the old kitchen and ate my warm pork. Then my strength returned to my hobbly legs and quivering arms. My orange ears relaxed and stood rigid and straight in my short brown hair. green eyes gleaming, I try to pry open the doors to the basement where Ahri stays. "Hey! I'm back everyone!" I heard the swirling wind outside and the doors jerked open as Ahri approached the dining room. Oh no.