REVAMPING MCTOPIA STORY

[SilverWolf101]

I need to finish mine. My mom took the IPad away from meeee.

Talon continued to tell me about the Spirit Land.
"So is it only us two?" I wonder.
"No. there are some others." He replies.
"Why have you come to me though? I'm sure you didn't come here to chat." I ask.
"This "family" of yours... You cannot trust them" He begins
"Wha-?" I begin to say when we interrupts.
"They are using, well are going to use you. The don't really care for you." He continues to tell lies. Im not sure if I should believe him or not.
"You have two choices. You stay with your so called family, or you can join my side, and stop them. Your choice" He tells me. I blink.
What? Should I believe him? Talon, someone I JUST met. In a strange land like this! I won't believe him.
"I am staying with my family! They were always at my side!" I shout at him. "I don't believe you!"
"Wrong choice" He growls. He lunges forward and slashes my shoulder. Everything goes black for about 4 seconds. Then I open my eyes And blink twice.
Ahri notices the mumbles have stopped.
"She's back!" She shouts.
Back? I wonder.