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The story!
#1
I will copy/paste the chapters here.
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#2
Chapter 1
Once apon a time in the land of Mctopia...
There were 6 warriors. Silver the brave. Awesomeboo the quick. Golden the strong. Kittens the powerful. Challenger he clever. And Metazard the awesome. It is our duty to protect mctopia. The great and powerful God Inspiron sent us to defeat an Evil Lord named Ninja. It was easy but now there are three new enemies. I don't know their names but they plan to invade mctopia. One is the ruler of creepers. The other is the ruler of Spiders. And the third is the ruler of skeleton. We call them, Lord Creeper, Lord arachnid, and Queen Skele. My name is Silver. And with my fiends, I believe we can save mctopia.

By silverwolf101
#3
Chapter 2 PEDO BEAR SAVES THE DAY!
I sighed. "Meta I can't believe you lost the map!" I said. "Sorry. But there were so many fish in that river!" meta replied. "what should we do now?" asks Challenger. "how about we all rest and have a cookie" suggested Awesomeboo. "YAY COOKIES!" screams kittens. We all chow down. Then. Ask " I think we should keep going north." "I wish Inspiron was here.." said Lynx. We hear someone yell " BUT I AM HERE!" them Inspiron comes flying down naked. He says to go west until we find mctopia lake then we turn north. "um..thanks Inspiron." we all say shocked. Then he flys away. " that was awkward." says Lynx. We hear rustling. I pull out my sword. I hear a spider and an arrow whizzes by my arm. " spider jockey" I say. I kick the spider back and stab my sword into its head. "Go back to the terrible place you came from" I mutter. When I look up I see GoldenLynx and Metazard shooting the skeleton. Then there are more mobs. "we're being invaded!" I yell.
We kill as much mobs ask can. We are all low on health. "I guess this is it..." challenger says. Then a flaming arrow kills a creeper. We turn to see Lord Nickolas shooting down the mobs. "Thank goodness!" Golden says. We all have a snack and ask how Lord found us. "I used my PEDO POWERS!" He replies while sharpening his blade. Inspiron comes back and says " Since you saved them I'll let you touch kittens."

Also by silverwolf101
#4
Chapter 3 Butter Portal
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! DON'T.YOU. DARE!" screams kittens. "Fine. I guess you don't want the map " Then Lord sprinted away. Challenger walks a few steps to his right. "HEY I FOUND MCTOPIA LAKE!" I come over to see but it's a puddle. "Challenger the lake is behind u. -_-" Metazard says. "Which way are we going now?" Asks kittens. GoldenLynx paused for a second and then began to speak "Well, I don't remember so....." " you don't remember?!" I say. "We're going south" Decides Awesomeboo. "ok" challenger said. We Immediatly fall into a pitfall. And get teleported into a cage. We're all shocked.
"Lord Arachnid!" I say. He is silent and walks away. "hmm all we have is an almost broken spade, a bucket of water, and some sticks of butter. before anyone can talk I say "Everyone stand back. I know what to do." I make a two block hole ( the spade breaks after) I pour the water in and I throw the butter in the hole. Then I say "Butter portal, OPEN!" then I jump in the hole. I was about to drown then I am teleported away. "I guess we do the same o.o" Says Awesomeboo. When everyone is through the butter portal the see me battling tons of spiders. "Don't just stand there! Help!" I said while fighting off a spider. Then I hear a familiar voice, "Uciha?! Is that you?" I ask. " And me too!" I hear l3git say. We have to save them Awesomeboo and I say.

By silverwolf101 again.
#5
Chapter four. Arachnophobia.

I hear a scream. As I run around the corner I see kittens, silver, uciha, awesomeboo and l3git fighting a bunch of spiders. I turn around and yell "Challenger we have a lot of trouble, spiders." "Really?" he replies, "yes quickly come help me!" "give me one minute" says chall "I'm making a plan." golden and I join the battle. A couple stacks of string later challenger appears later up on a hole in the roof. "take these!" he yells and enderpearls rain down on us. We throw them at the hole in the roof and see chall placing red stone. "what are you doing?" asks boo. "you'll see" he replies. He places a redstonetorch and suddenly TNT falls from around us and kills all all the spiders below. Everyone congratulates him on a job well done. "hmm.." I mumble then I decide to jump down through the hole again. Soon everyone follows and I place a block of TNT that didn't ignite. I place a redstonetorch and the wall breaks open and suddenly were out in the open again. We're in a snow biome it's cold and we need healing.


By metazard
#6
Chapter Five- Snow Biome
Thousands ofthoughts zoom throughout my head. We are hurt, we need to heal up. We need food, or potions. Potion would be WAY to hard, so food. Food... Snow biome... Maybe meat? IF we can find some... But we would need to cook it...
I stumble, and realize how sleepy i am. I look around and see everyone looking like they are about to pass out. Its late at night, and mobs with come soon..
"I think we should rest. I know we need to heal, but we can't do it now. Too many mobs," I suggest.
"Sounds good to me," l3git agrees.
"Hrrmmm.." ...What was that?
"Hrmmmnmnnnnmm"
I look over to see a sleeping uciha, leaning against a tree. "Hrrmmnrmnmrnm," uciha mumbles in his sleep.
I surpress a fit giggles.
I see silver asleep, near uciha. Challenger is sprawled out under a tree, and so is meta. Kittens is huddled next to golden, fast asleep. L3git sits beneath a large spruce tree, so i plop myself next to him. I lay my head on his shoulder, and fall asleep almost instantly.

I wake up covered in a layer of snow. Shivering, i wake up l3git.
"5 more minute- boo? Where... Oh yeah, the spiders." l3git says.
I try to speak, but all the comes out is a wheeze.
"Oh my gosh, Boo. You lips are blue! Are you ok?!"
I nod my head, but then a searing pain makes me wince.
"Wake..Wake everyone up..." I croak.
L3git hands me his leather tunic, and then he runs to wake everyone.
Once everyone is up, we huddle together.
"Is.. Is everyone ok?" I manage to croak.
"I'm fine. A little cold, but fine" Kittens answers.
"My wounds seemed to have healed a bit." Golden mentions.
"I'm still a bit hungry." uciha says.
"I think i see some pigs one there. I'll get their meat" meta offers.
"I'll make a fire!" challenger suggests.
I attempt to get up, but fall back down right away.
"Boo, you look like ice cube. Are you sure you are ok?' l3git asks, concerned.
A pain erupts in my head. Hot tears sting my face. I slowly shake my head.
"We will get food. You just rest." l3git demands.
I lay down, and pull the tunic over me. The last thing i hear, is l3git saying, "I think boo is sick. We need to get food and a fire NOW."
Then i fall into a cold, dark, dreamless sleep.

By awesome boo
#7
Chapter Six
"what...?" I say while waking up.i shake the snow off me and i nudged uciha awake. I yawn and I realize people are discussing what to do now. I overhear that boo is sick. I want to help her, but I don't know what I can do. To help. While challenger starts a fire and some of the others get food, I sneak off to think. I walk. I wonder if Inspiron was watching us now. I come across a teiga, and check if there is anything in my pack I could use. All I have is logs. I make a crafting table and an axe. The tree comes falling to the earth quickly and I grab as much wood as I can. I find bones on the ground and I decide to bring them with me. Cut down one tree at a time. I stop working and I rest on the tree I chopped down. I get lost in my thoughts, then I hear a whimper. I look down at my feet to see a wolf with her pups. I tame them all. I realize that I am lost. I climb a tree and see the snow biome. I jump down and I land gracefully. The wolves follow me home and I feel like we have accomplished nothing. A potion splashes in front of me and I become temporarily blinded. I faint and when I wake up I'm in some sort of cave. Some sort of....lair. "Lord ARachnid must have done this..." I say to myself. I see something...no someone, run past me. I can hardly move because there is rope tied around me. I somehow get o my feet. I can't go anywhere with this rope. The same figure I saw a moment ago came forward and unites me. He steps out of the shadows and into the light of the lava. "Mcman!"

By silver wolf
#8
Chapter 7
I see the others get to work and I go the opposite direction everyone else is going. I crouch low as I tread through the thick snowy ground. I grab my bow out when I see an egg. Chicken! I stumble up the nearest tree and look around. The terrain looks exactly the same. I shiver into my leather armor, when I spot a flash of red. I jump into the snow on the ground, to realize it's as high as my knees. I move as quickly as I can towards the flash of red. It starts to become a challenge to walk. I shoot an arrow towards the creature lurking on the frozen tundra. I grab the chicken's meat and move backwards toward the tree. When I climb back up, I realize this was the wrong tree. I look around the icy ground for land marks, but I see none. I scream for help. "Challenger, Metazard, ANYONE!" I crawl farther into the leaves. Im lost. I don't really want to admit it, but I'm lost. "I hate the tundra. I will never set foot in one again. I wish they would disappear off the face of Minecraftia." I mumble to myself. Little do I know, challenger was running below, looking for my scared scream. Back at camp, a fire was being sparked together, and the the others huddle closer to it. "Kittens, have you seen Silver? I've looked everywhere for her." Uciha asks nervously. Kittens shakes her head. Uciha looks worriedly about the taiga. Awesomeboo was being fed freshly roasted pork and she was slumped on a tree stump. Metazard had killed two pigs found in the tundra and had hit them with a make-do sword. The camp was warm and tents were ready to set up. Back in the tree I was dozing off. "No... Don't sleep.... I could die.... if I sleep...." I think warm thoughts, but I always find something that could go wrong. Then I think a thought that makes me worried. What if the warriors break up? "I never want us to break up... We'll be together. I like being with them... They care for me." Right then, my head turns up. I jump down into the snow. My friends need me. And I need them. I grab my bow and sharpen arrows. I knock down the tree and start to make a shelter. Someone will find me. As challenger roamed the icy plains to find a camp again, it's like a mirror maze. Everything like the next. It had started snowing, so there was no trail to follow. "Maybe I shouldn't have looked for her.." He turns back where he thought was camp and ran. Smoke wisped into the sky that way, though that was unnoticeable in this storm. At camp everyone was in the new tents, sharing stories to pass the time. "...And that's how I met Silver." Uciha ends. As challenger approaches, he finds a wooden shelter with a fire. He cautiously approaches the fire and sits down. I was sleeping in the tent, forgetting the hazards of sleeping. A figure in the darkness signals to a group of creatures. "We will get them all... One by one." The voice says in the darkness. By now, challenger was weary, and had fallen asleep by the fire, with his leather cap burning off his head. The figure moved closer and spiders followed. Spiders wrapped us up in string, followed by rope. The rope was knotted tightly around me and challenger, and the spiders moved away across the snow, following the black figure. My eyes slowly grow accustomed to the darkness. "Huh?" I look around and see challenger sprawled on the stony floor. "Get up... Challenger, wake.. up. Challenger lifts his head and looks around. "Where are we? Why aren't the others here?" Challenger wonders. "I remember *cough cough* sitting in my tent. What about *cough* you?" He tells me about finding a fire and sleeping beside it. I giggle at him as I look at his head. "You burned your hat off." I sit against the stone wall to which I'm bound. My hands were cuffed to the wall, and challenger was stuck to the food, bound by metal chains. The floors were mossy, and there was only the dim light of a torch giving any clue of the surrounding area. "I hope you enjoy your stay." The voice echoes around the room. Then a two identical potions are tossed in. "Drink up!" The voice laughs menacingly. I study the potion. My throat is parched dry as a desert. I don't notice anything wrong with it in the dim light. I gulp it down and the last thing I hear is, "Golden, No!" Now only one thing is recited in my head. Serve Lord Arachnid.

By goldenlynx
#9
Chapter 8
Recap-mcman unties silver, she went back to camp. then mcman leaves. silver tells her friends about mcman. silver and l3git go to Pensi tribe. get potions, then are stuck becuase they only have enought for 2 people to use butterportal, becuase they werent expecting gemu

The Others
"they have to be here somewhere!" yelled meta "LYNX! CHALLENGER!" no response. "there is only one way" announces silver, "Mcmanaway from the Pensi Tribe, will know where to find them. the only problem... there on the other side of the world." Kittens is struck by an idea. "The butter Portal. We can use a butter portal to make our way to the Pensi village!" "your right. but i only have enought butter for 2 of us to make it there and back." announced silver. By now there thinking, what they should do. should they risk going out into the unforboding wilderness, risking there lives to find there friends, or should they send split there group up even more, risking there safety. They reach a conclusion, to send only silver and l3git to mcmanaways tribe.

Names are earned
"I've been expecting you," announces the great leader, "you should have came sooner. Here take these potions." Silver notices each are each are labeled with a name. "they will enhance all you your strengths by ten, giving lynx the power to lift an ox, kittens the power to be a nyan cat, challenger the IQ of a superhuman, and much much more."
"thank you kind sire" announced l3git
"all is earned young one. Oh i almost forgot, take my son Gemukokoro, to aid you in your quest. he will be extremly important for the task ahead, and without him evil will triumph."

By challenger
#10
Chapter 9
"Hi! My name is gemu, the fox. and i will help you on my journey!" I say Cheerily "what can i do to help?" I say to the group in front of me. "Well first, you can tell us about yourself!" Says kittens. "Well i am a boy, but i am gay, and i tend to cross-dress a lot..." I continue on telling them about myself, and about how i was originally a fox but a dying mage gave me his power and turned me human. "...And this magical orb" i flick to my orb of magic to my side "is the source of my power!"

A few hours later after doing some other stuffz

Metazard looks hesitant, "So, you wont molest me in my sleep will you?" He asked, not wanting to hear the response "No, of course i wont! i have a boyfriend named Gabe back in the tribe, and he is okay with me adventuring with you!" Metazard looks relieved "So what is the goal of this journey?" i asked looking curious "Well it WAS to protect mctopia but it turned out we lost two group members, Challenger and Goldenlynx and we need to find them..." Says L3git looking grave. "Well don't worry, i am an excellent tracker, and my magic and silver here will obviously help too! Do you have anything with chally and lynx's scent?" I ask.
"Well we have a scrap of Golden's fur that we found while looking for her" Said boo, "Will that help at all?" I looked at the tuft of golden fur and smiled "Yes actually, that is PERFECT!" I sniffed the fur and handed it to silver to sniff too "hmm this snow is making it harder to smell but i can barely sense her scent. you can smell it too, can you not silver?" i looked at her "yes i can smell it too! let me call my wolves to help us" Replied silver "Ah yes, ill call my foxes too!" We both howled into the night and a pack of wolves and foxes emerged from the shadows. And we started the search for golden and chally



... about an hour in uchiha inquired "So what exactly is the difference between foxes and wolves?" I looked at him while still walking "Well Foxes are more playful, and lighter on their feet, and stealthier than wolves are, but foxes arent as strong as wolves though, wolves have a stronger bite but foxes can still mess you up if they tried." i replied "and when turned into humans, foxes are magical attackers that move very quickly and can dodge easily, while wolves are physical attackers who retain their claws, strength, and can block attacks better." Uchiha, looking very mind blown and educated indeed, continued on with the journey looking at the foxes and wolves, and seeing all of the differences i mentioned.

"I dont see anything yet" metazard said impatiently "There is a cave up ahead, i can sense it but it cant be seen with the human eye, maybe i can give you a closer look, here sit on this for a second" I willed my magic orb to zip over to metazard. he looked hesitant and asked "Why do you want me to sit on it?" he replied "Would you rather stand on it?" I willed my orb to zoom behind metazard, and knock his knees from under him so he was sitting on the orb "Wha-" he said before i said "Hold on tight!" with a smile and the orb zoomed upward above the treeline so that metazard could see the cave up ahead from an aerial view. "ARE YOU BATSHIT CRAZY!" Kittens yelled at me "No, im Foxshit crazy" i replied and stuck my tounge out. "He isnt going to fall, he is holding on for dear life if he is smart, ill let him down if you want" I let the orb come down and stop slowly before hitting the ground. "After you were done freaking out, did you see the cave i talked about?" i asked meta with a smile. He replied grudgingly "No matter how crazy you are, you were right. the cave looks very ominous and DONT EVER DO THAT AGAIN WITHOUT ASKING" I replied "No promises hunter" And sticked my tongue out. and we continued the journey.

"Here is the cave, are we ready do go in?" I asked everybody. "Yeah, i think so, ill go in first and scout it out" Boo said, and tried to walk into the cave, but got pushed back by a magic field. "Oopsie! forgot to mention, there are magical traps in this cave, that one being the first. that is why im here! my magic can override the dark magic in here" I spinned around and struck a pose "FREE OF CHARGE!" I raised my orb in the air and used my powers to steal the essence from the shield and store it in my orb which turned a slightly more green shade. "How did you do that?" Said kittens astonished "Oh, thats apart of my powers! i can steal essences from magical sources and use them against people. and i can even steal LIFE essences. you see how my orb turned a bit more green?" i said. they nodded and i said "Well when it goes through sombody, it steals a bit of their essence on the way in and out. and when it glows a bright green, it steals a bit more of their essence and transfers to me! and i get healed. but of course, i have more powers, thats how awesome i am." i winked and we entered the cave.

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