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WAUFLS wrote:If you see any errors in my appeal could you please point them out so I can fix them? (It's hard to type well on an iPod...)
-WAUFLS Half the title is misspelled.
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i like this one...
matt. hes a keeper
Saying f*** you to people who hurt you feels really good.
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"APPEAL" not "APEAL".
But you cleaned it up overall! The only thing I'd recommend a little more is a little more background info. I don't think I was on the server at the time you were unbanned or such, so just provide a little info about when you were active, how you stumbled across the server, etc.
Best of luck though! Good app.
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Thank you for pointing that out i was lacking in areas and that i misspelled the title.
thank you
ps i think you were but mabie on a different name, it was a long time ago
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WAUFLS wrote:Thank you for pointing that out i was lacking in areas and that i misspelled the title.
thank you
ps i think you were but mabie on a different name, it was a long time ago I've been here for like a year and a half, so probably not, if it was a while ago. Turn your autocorrect on or somethin dude. xD The appeal woulda came easier if it was on xD
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Hey guys, I would really appreciate some feedback, anything. How much you hate me, how much you love me, how my chances are looking, grammar or spelling I messed up on, anything you want to tell me, please just post a quick reply telling me what you think/feel. Anything helps, even negative, without negative feedback I wouldn't be who I am today, so please tell me what I'm doing wrong, what I'm doing right, anything.  " title="Very Happy"> Sincerely -WAUFLS
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Lol, you just edited the title before my very eyes, anyways about the appeal, it's pretty good. You sound like a nice guy who made some mistakes and is willing to change.
Good luck!
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WAUFLS wrote:Hello McTopians some of you may remember me from when I used to play on the server, I used to play very often on the server I've seen many new people come through old people leave, I've watched the spawn be rebuilt, I've made a house that few of you may have seen, (it's in a mountain behind spawn and over a lake)i had built up a small fortune and gotten allong well with most people, but not all, not gonna say names, but i had done a bit of greifing when i first joined, and it came back to bite me in the a**, but judging from what I read on the forums the server has changed a lot since I was banned so many new players, a lot of change, my house in ruins and many of my friends gone (from leaving or being banned) But back to my story, a long time ago I used to grief / steal quite a bit, but I have gotten better and aged and learned a lot. I hope that someone will read this and give me the chance to rejoin the wonderful community of McTopia, and join back into the fun. I am aware that in the past I have done many horrible thing that may have angered others. After I was banned I moved on and I have matured and have learned what it is like to be greifed and I now know that it is not funny and that it can actually affect someone on a personal level even though it is "just a game". And I hope that anyone that may be angry at me will give me a second chance to prove that I truly am sorry for my immature actions and the things that I may have said. I promise that if you guys take the time to un ban me you will not be let down, and I promise to help anyone that I may have hurt or damaged their property in any way that is within my power. " title="Very Happy">
Please give me the chance to help others and rejoin this wonderful community
-WAUFLS
On a side note - according to my long time friend (in real life) duskypiano - our home has been destroyed, and I would like to be able to repair that house that I used to live in and the starter house that I would give to a random new player that looked like the we're need of help. Or if necessary start over and look for a new beginning.
And if you are still reading " title="Very Happy">  THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME!!! Okay, the app is good and you seem like you've changed, as anyone from the old spawn would've over the years, but nothing can be done if you don't specify your user, I kinda doubt your username is 'WAUFLS' but if it is, well, uh. lol
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Metazard wrote:WAUFLS wrote:Hello McTopians some of you may remember me from when I used to play on the server, I used to play very often on the server I've seen many new people come through old people leave, I've watched the spawn be rebuilt, I've made a house that few of you may have seen, (it's in a mountain behind spawn and over a lake)i had built up a small fortune and gotten allong well with most people, but not all, not gonna say names, but i had done a bit of greifing when i first joined, and it came back to bite me in the a**, but judging from what I read on the forums the server has changed a lot since I was banned so many new players, a lot of change, my house in ruins and many of my friends gone (from leaving or being banned) But back to my story, a long time ago I used to grief / steal quite a bit, but I have gotten better and aged and learned a lot. I hope that someone will read this and give me the chance to rejoin the wonderful community of McTopia, and join back into the fun. I am aware that in the past I have done many horrible thing that may have angered others. After I was banned I moved on and I have matured and have learned what it is like to be greifed and I now know that it is not funny and that it can actually affect someone on a personal level even though it is "just a game". And I hope that anyone that may be angry at me will give me a second chance to prove that I truly am sorry for my immature actions and the things that I may have said. I promise that if you guys take the time to un ban me you will not be let down, and I promise to help anyone that I may have hurt or damaged their property in any way that is within my power. " title="Very Happy">
Please give me the chance to help others and rejoin this wonderful community
-WAUFLS
On a side note - according to my long time friend (in real life) duskypiano - our home has been destroyed, and I would like to be able to repair that house that I used to live in and the starter house that I would give to a random new player that looked like the we're need of help. Or if necessary start over and look for a new beginning.
And if you are still reading " title="Very Happy"> THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME!!!
Okay, the app is good and you seem like you've changed, as anyone from the old spawn would've over the years, but nothing can be done if you don't specify your user, I kinda doubt your username is 'WAUFLS' but if it is, well, uh. lol Don't worry it's his name! " title="Very Happy">
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You make a lot of good points in this which were nice to read. It just needs a bit of organisation and I think maybe I will vouch for yah
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